Gruesome Decay

[SeeYouSeptember]

Love is a flower that only blooms once.
Enjoy it while it lasts.
Then it wilts away...

The past is still with me like an abiding ghost.
Haunting my every move.
It won't let go until I'm far gone.


Should I go? How bout now?
Please tell me what to do.
My mind is indecisive.
Had too many, and told nothing but the truth.

My actions fill my heart with affliction.
The limit has been reached.
But it won't let up until I explode.


Should I go? How bout now?
Please tell me what to do.
My mind is indecisive.
Had too many, and told nothing but the truth.

All things end the same way.
But how they end differs.
Gruesome decay.

Should I go? How bout now?
Please tell me what to do.
My mind is indecisive.
Had too many, and told nothing but the truth.

[Mike Smith]

Wow this was extremely good, and an enjoyable read.

I especially like how you used different things for love instead of cliches like most people(Including myself) probably would have done.

Love is a flower that only blooms once.
Enjoy it while it lasts.
Then it wilts away...

The past is still with me like an abiding ghost.
Haunting my every move.
It won't let go until I'm far gone.


Those 2 stanzas are amazing and well written, and not cliche at all which is good.

Overall great job man

[*ambien*]

ambien.
is.
coming.

[SeeYouSeptember]

ambien.
is.
coming.

TROLL

[SeeYouSeptember]

Someone else please comment, I need help. ):

[bangoballa]

dawg, i love it man, solid solid piece, keep writing and posting, i'm going to check out all your posts now :)