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Seasonas
03/01/09, 03:37 AM
don't supress your self in negative energy
regret past times and think gods your enemy
your lost without a purpose
on the edge, nervous, drawing the curtains
drown out the light, hurting
remain in the shadows lurking
in the dark rotting with the vermin
on the brink you stop thinking
in a melodic state sinking deeper and deeper
wake before you see the reeper
light one up and start shaking the atoms
that left your heart breaking
the patterns of people reaching, touching one another
then flip the coin , kids cutting each other
stained blood as it's drained from the head up
i'm fed up with the times that lead us
to believe we can't achieve
or retrieve our goals
only with peace at home
head in knees, think alone
nothin arround me
fuck the foundings it's just common sorroundings
can't you see what hell this is
living life without visits
at one with your visions
as your mind in prisons
arisen like a phoenix from the ashes
now i'm back having relapses
my mind collapses , time keeps turning
weed keeps burning
giving me a different perspective
as if this is what i aspected
i couldn't contemplate put my mind on a plate
cast it out
it's harvest now
feed on my limbs
digest my sin, i'm blessed to begin
a new chapter
and i'm gunna capture the essence
thats my souls intention
my life is relevant , i'm alive thats evidence
at piece with mind , the key is yours to define
open the door and adore the shine
of the summer sun and think
last summer spent was hell bent lost with out permit
left alone like a hermit without the belief
of a god that sees everything even our dreams
if so the things hes seen through my eyes
he would revive the lost lifes
that didn't deserve it , but i suppose everything happens for a reason
doesn't matter about the innocent bleeding
as long as people are believing.

bangoballa
03/01/09, 11:40 AM
i love how u just randomly put let the weed keep burning in there haha, this is a solid freestyle piece, needs a point though, i don't see a clear point to the piece unless i'm missing it?

Seasonas
03/02/09, 12:44 PM
The point was how people believe in religion no matter about all the stuff that happens , as long as they have there belief it's 'alright' haha was in wierd mood :S