The Antidote

[bangoballa]

Face to face
For the first time
Since the last time
you said goodbye
I see the dismay
you've been hiding from
Your eyes clinch to mine

The thoughts in my mind
Are burning my insides
Thinking of times
You and I up all night
Wasting my life
On summer nights
Means nothing at all
Nothing at all

Hiding from me
Running away
Landing at my foot steps
Do you feel the tension?
feel the anger?
Do you feel the love
That we shared?
Does it bother you to know
I'm doing just fine?
Our pages have been written
Locked up in the back of my head

The thoughts in my mind
Are burning my insides
Thinking of times
You and I up all night
Wasting my life
On summer nights
Means nothing at all
Nothing at all

I don't even know you anymore
The serenity you brought to my life
Is a cancer I cannot cure
Over time this plain white pill
Over time this bottle I seek
Over time the flames in my lungs
Will be my antidote

[livingalive626]

sounds roughly like something from All Time Low or old Fall Out Boy.
not bad. i prefer more poetical stuff though so my opinion shouldn't be counted as much. like the last verse/bridge the best.

[bangoballa]

haha naw man i like ur posts, but yea i don't want to be like fall out boy type, i was hoping more on the lines of senses fail, silverstein, more of the emo/screamo/ rock genre.

[livingalive626]

yeah now that you mention it i could see that coming from the likes of silverstein... i love them but still not my line of "expertise" :)

[thespearkid]

Poetical.

[bangoballa]

i try to be kinda poetical, everything i write is usually something to do with a life experience and i just try to put it in a poetic way