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XLadyofSorrowX
10/14/05, 04:56 PM
“Punk Rock Love”

You start with two hearts

Both broken then sewn back

Darkness tortured their souls

Now they are no longer black



On is a punk with an attitude

The other is a punk rock star

They first met each other at a concert

Later at a bar



They have become the best

Couple of punk rock heaven

Then they had to leave each other

For a month which felt like never again



When they met again he saw

His lover injured from a fight

With her ex-lover who

Threatened her to die



He tried his best to keep her away

Away from the Dark horrible world

But whenever he had to leave for a tour

He couldn’t protect his little girl



She stayed with her friends

Till he came back

But the one she hated was still around

She knew it was a fact



With a weapon at her side

She went to her home

Someone was near although

She wanted to be alone



As he stalked her she was scared

And she didn’t know what to do

She tried calling 911

but it didn’t come through

She turned around and saw



One of the worst sites of all

The one she loved the most

Was hung against a wall

She turned once more



Afraid of what was to come

There he was ready to kill

She hated what he had done



He had a gun at her head

Ready to let the bullet go

He knew that it was right

And had to kill his hated foe



He was ready to pull when

She stabbed him in the chest

She knew he was dead

And she knew nothing less



He had plan this all along

Torturing her life

All that he wanted

Was her to be his wife



But what happened earlier to her lover

Was what really hit her hard

She was lost alone in her world

Nothing left but a picture and a card



To describe what happened that night

She grabbed a paper and pen

She ended it with

“Demolition Lovers…. To The End”



You can send your opinion if you want to.....I do not mind.... I can post more if you want me to

Brianfarg
10/14/05, 05:07 PM
You can't be serious.

ArTkY_
10/14/05, 06:28 PM
What the fuck. Why would you spend so much time writing such a worthless pile of shit?

Apollo II
10/14/05, 07:21 PM
:shake:

Brianfarg
10/14/05, 08:36 PM
She can't possibly be serious. Look at this:

"I am ADDICTED to Punk Rock Music. My Chemical Romance, Fall Out Boy, The Used, Green Day, Alkaline Trio, Simple Plan, and more. Yet I live in the south. Not much punk here. No good concerts (unless they come once a year they are always far away)"

Common. But what if she is? If she is, then I have another reason to hate southern people.

rocker_05
10/18/05, 01:51 PM
No. Noooooooooooooo.

punkpixie
10/18/05, 02:31 PM
A lot of people post shit on here all the time, and I've read quite a lot of it. I have to say though that this is quite possibly one of the worst 'poems' I have ever read anywhere. I said this to some other kid on here a few days ago; quit being depressed for the sake of it or because it's in fashion. I actually doubt that you have the intelligence to be truly depressed about something. Don't post anything like this again, I don't want to waste another 5 minutes of my life. In fact that was so horrible I wish I could unread it. Ugh.

allelish
10/18/05, 02:47 PM
I didn't read the poem, just the first four lines, but i do feel really sorry for this person. This is a cut-throat forum.

ArTkY_
10/18/05, 03:20 PM
She can't possibly be serious. Look at this:

"I am ADDICTED to Punk Rock Music. My Chemical Romance, Fall Out Boy, The Used, Green Day, Alkaline Trio, Simple Plan, and more. Yet I live in the south. Not much punk here. No good concerts (unless they come once a year they are always far away)"

Common. But what if she is? If she is, then I have another reason to hate southern people.
I'm southern and you love me. Hypocrite.

swirlofhues
10/18/05, 03:52 PM
hahahaha


i love this. seriously, it's ace.

Brianfarg
10/18/05, 04:16 PM
I'm southern and you love me. Hypocrite.

You're right... DAMN! Actually, all the southern people I've met, I've liked.

de la sympathie
10/18/05, 06:30 PM
"demolition lovers" is the name of a my chemical romance song.
i think my eyes are bleeding. fuck.

Anton Djamoos
10/21/05, 10:32 PM
1. Stop writing poetry, you have no grasp of what makes up a good poem.

2. Stop listening to My Chemical Romance for poetic inspiration.

3. Stop posting your poetry in these forums if you do not follow steps 1 & 2.

I'm really sorry but it's not possible to be nice about this poem.