City of Lonely Shadows

[smileseptember7]

Cities fall and crumble beneath my wings
I try to pick up the pieces
of my heart
but it's shattered into a thousand parts
and impossible is what I'm looking at

But hopes and dreams
are nothing from impossible
and the ground which I stand upon
is growing weak
and falls under the pressures of you and me

{Chourus}
Silhouettes and shades of gray
are the visions
to my naked eye, bearing the lies
of two black eyes

Gun wounds healing quickly
broken hearts stay the same
and I'm nothing but a loosing player
in this fucked up game

The engine of the car roars
as my lips begin to move
and what you need to hear
is carried of with the smoke


{Chourus}
Silhouettes and shades of gray
are the visions
to my naked eye, bearing the lies
of two black eyes

Goodbye beautiful
save this tear of mine
and never let it srop onto the floor

[ArTkY_]

No..

Bad title too.

[IAmCountryMusic]

No..

Bad title too.
yeah

[Blared]

It's not that bad...

[a speedo model]

it's ok, not my thing though.

[Bleedingthorne1]

hey i like it but maybe thts because i write just like u........

[para ser libre]

i couldnt read past the first three lines...sorry keep trying though

[lovely864md]

The first verse was kinda cliche, but the rest was okay.
"Silhouettes and shades of gray" I liked that line

[lfdfforever]

i think you tryed too hard

[Stu-Stu-Stutter]

It feels like I've heard the first verse before.
It's too cliche.

[theMATEOlife]

...i've had better.