Pause, Stop, Rewind

[Mike Smith]

Yes i realize this song is probably very cliche, but i wrote it as a powerpop/electronic/pop kind of song. So dont just blast me for it being "cliche" ok? Please give me constructive criticism on how i can improve the lyrical content and or w/e else.


Pause, Stop, Rewind:

Verse1:

Tonight, I am by your side
I'm thinking bout everything that's happened
Its like i've known you forever
I think, how time flies by
Just sitting here listenin to your voice
Cause its all i ever want to hear

Chorus:

Why does this night have to end?
Cant we rewind to the beginning?
Cause i don't wanna speak the words
So please lets skip the goodbyes
Cause i wanna be with you forever

Verse 2:

When the end might be close
I want to hold you and never let you go
No no no i'll never let you go
Cause without you i'd go through withdrawals
And i wanna tell you that someday, somehow
You'll be mine forever

Chorus:

Why does this night have to end?
Cant we rewind to the beginning?
Cause i don't wanna speak the words
So please lets skip the goodbyes
Cause i wanna be with you forever

(Bridge)

Chorus:

Why does this night have to end?
Cant we rewind to the beginning?
Cause i don't wanna speak the words
So please lets skip the goodbyes
Cause i wanna be with you forever

[Meenaghey Aym]

its sweet...cliched&simple but innocent. i think ppl shud simply write this kind of thing occasionally even if they dont share it. only thing maybe another verse. or r there lyrics to the bridge?

[Mike Smith]

no lyrics to the bridge yet, but maybe soon

[Meenaghey Aym]

only thing is that wen you hav something cliched the lyrical content isnt very ...tantalizing...