Never can again

[jacdaniel]

Can you offer some feedback on this please? Im attempting to write some good lyrics about an old friend of mine and his untimely passing. Basically, i lost contact with him for a number of reason's and I kinda regret that now that he has passed away.

Never can again

You were always such a nice guy
You were always my friend
I wish it didn’t have to be this way
Wish it didn’t have to end
I heard things were tough
Wish I could’ve been there
Would have liked to speak to you
But never can again

(Chorus)
We take things for granted
Until them things are gone
No appreciation
Now we’re forced to move on

[EatItSucka]

Can you offer some feedback on this please? Im attempting to write some good lyrics about an old friend of mine and his untimely passing. Basically, i lost contact with him for a number of reason's and I kinda regret that now that he has passed away.

Never can again

You were always such a nice guy
You were always my friend
I wish it didn’t have to be this way
Wish it didn’t have to end
I heard things were tough
Wish I could’ve been there
Would have liked to speak to you
But never can again

(Chorus)
We take things for granted
Until them things are gone
No appreciation
Now we’re forced to move on


I used to have a friend that showed me the world, but we went separate ways. I would like to add to this thread if I may:

You were always there
When I was all alone
Kept me up on my feet
The kind words said, the love you'd shown

I took our friendship granted
And lost a brother forever
But will not forget what you taught me
Never say never

If I could see you one more time
I'd give you a hug and cry
Seeing you would bring me joy
Your one hell of a guy

I miss you Loric...

[jacdaniel]

Thats really nice! Unfortunatelly it happens.