Our Soundtrack

[JustAHomeBoy]

Is it really so easy to be ignored
I drown in our dashboard
Our rain doesn't rain, but it pours
How long will this last?
I never knew they'd cut the cord
Break the strings, kill the chord
Our lack of words drowns us aboard
Our problems seem so vast

So when the noose starts to rip
Your teeth bite your lip
I think I'll have another sip
To go to another direction

But will we wait to see the falling of our disease
We know it's coming, should we wait and see?

Or leave this place to never come back
Our lack of words will be our soundtrack
But I know you won't ever fallback
I always fall for your tricks

Is it so easy to get bored
Of this kid whom you adored
Now his voice is just discord
Your ears never listen

So when the noose starts to rip
Your teeth bite your lip
I think I'll have another sip
To go to another direction

But will we wait to see the falling of our disease
We know it's coming should we wait and see?

Or leave this place to never come back
Our lack of words will be our soundtrack
But I know you won't ever fallback
I always fall for your tricks
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New here and just wrote these...what do you think?

[millyXmalicious]

ZOMG... I'd buy your album right now!

[Troggy]

ZOMG... I'd buy your album right now!

That comment says more about the quality of the piece than anyone else could possibly say.

[eliselovesmusic]

I like :-D

The rhyming is good and the lines with chord/cord are cool...

The lines "it's so easy to get bored.....never listen" is a really good verse in my opinion.

"I think I'll have another sip to go to another direction" - is this line about getting drunk by chance?

Do you have music to it? If so - where can I hear it?

[JustAHomeBoy]

Thanks everybody for the feedback..I thought that the lyrics were gonna be a massive failure...:D

And no, no music yet because I lack a good voice, and until I am able to learn how to sing or find someone who has a good voice, these shall stick to their "no music" status.

[eliselovesmusic]

I too share your lack of a voice - although I got me a singer :-)

Your seriously 15yrs old? It's pretty good stuff for 15 eh

[JustAHomeBoy]

Ja...thank you..I didn't think anyone would like it :P

[TBS0116]

i like it.

[eliselovesmusic]

Oi! Homeboy! Post more stuff! hehe