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Mike Smith
03/11/09, 11:34 AM
My friend asked me to write a christian song, so here it is.

What do you think of it?

Verse 1:
You are the light of my life
And you mean the world to me
Always there when i need you
Cause my faith is everlasting

Chorus:
Lord, you lift me up high
No matter what i do
Lord, You've never abandoned me
you are the greatest thing in my world
You're the one i want
You're the one i need
Anywhere i go...


Verse 2:
I pray to you
When im feeling down
Cause you always make me feel better
I shout your name
When im feeling lonely
Cause i know your with me through and through

Chorus:
Lord, you lift me up high
No matter what i do
Lord, You've never abandoned me
you are the greatest thing in my world
You're the one i want
You're the one i need
Anywhere i go...


Bridge:
Lord you're always there for me
No matter what i do
No matter what i say
Lord, im glad youre in my life

Because...

Chorus:
Lord, you lift me up high
No matter what i do
Lord, You've never abandoned me
you are the greatest thing in my world
You're the one i want
You're the one i need
Anywhere i go...

(End.)

Laural666
03/11/09, 11:37 AM
Hahah!!

OldJersey
03/11/09, 11:41 AM
Generic, unoriginal, bland and boring

Mike Smith
03/11/09, 11:46 AM
Hahah!!

Lol whats so funny?

Generic, unoriginal, bland and boring

I wasnt going for anything groundbreaking or original, i just wrote it to make my friend happy

But thanks for the input jersey.

jawstheme
03/11/09, 11:53 AM
Try not to be so cliche with your lyrics.

Mike Smith
03/11/09, 11:54 AM
Try not to be so cliche with your lyrics.

I try not to, but it always seems to happen haha

I guess i'm just stuck in a cliche stage if my writing at the moment for some reason.

jawstheme
03/11/09, 12:04 PM
I try not to, but it always seems to happen haha

I guess i'm just stuck in a cliche stage if my writing at the moment for some reason.

It's probably hard not to be when writing a christian song.

Mike Smith
03/11/09, 12:21 PM
It's probably hard not to be when writing a christian song.

Very true lol

I mean even the most famous christian songs are cliched bigtime :P