Lost In The Sea Of Stories

[SeeYouSeptember]

Thanks for any suggestions or comments.


The anger fills my ears
Crying, yelling and screaming is all there to hear
It's always there
My heart with indefinite affliction
My heart will go on unable to explain
And the wounds are so severe

It makes no sense at all
How things started seven years just fall away
One thing could do a lifetime of wrong
It makes no sense at all

Our lives end as we know it today
As we know it the sight isn't so pretty
This memory will always be with me
Until the skies turns gray and I die the following day
Until that day I'll always be here unable to explain

[Troggy]

I think you should finish the song before people tell you if they like it or not.

[SeeYouSeptember]

I think you should finish the song before people tell you if they like it or not.

If it's crappy before it's done then whats the point to finish it?

[Troggy]

If it's crappy before it's done then whats the point to finish it?

Because at least seeing the whole thing might clue someone in on what you are talking about.

[SeeYouSeptember]

You can understand what I'm talking about, you're just being an ignorant asshole by saying it has to be finished to be criticized.

[Troggy]

You can understand what I'm talking about, you're just being an ignorant asshole by saying it has to be finished to be criticized.

hahahahahaahahahahah

[SeeYouSeptember]

hahahahahaahahahahah

Fuck off.

[fishingthe_sky]

How things started seven years ago just fall away. Yes?

Clearly this is related to the other piece you have posted, but again, there's not much here to really determine what is actually going on, so you can't fault Troggy for that. The title doesn't seem at all connected to this piece. Honestly, this feels very melodramatic.

[Kirsty.com]

i like it. well done.

[thespearkid]

Not good at all.

[SeeYouSeptember]

Fuck, I need classes.