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[Anton Djamoos]

If creating a flowing waterfall sound
Locks me away in a cell, so be it!
I’d rather the prison in which I’m bound
Than sound like an overpoetic idiot!

I cringe when reading this boundaryless,
Unorganized, wannabe-swish drivel.
The words should have a mellifluous bliss,
Not language that makes me want to shrivel.

Words are moved
around,

separated

without form
for a so-called
“effect,” which comes off as
shallow.
stupid.
asinine.
Is cohesiveness too much to ask?

[NobodysSlave]

haha passive aggressive...i like it :-)