Leave You

[justabit]

I was just a bit bored when i wrote this..hope u pple like it!

when you’re so tired
that you can’t walk
and the path that you take
scares you so much you can’t talk

when you’re mind is a mess
and you no longer make sense
when you can’t catch your breath
because your pain is immense

don’t worry I’ll be here
i won’t let you fall
i’ll calm your fears
i’ll come when you call
i’ll be the one you talk to
i’m here right now, forever
and I’ll never leave you

when you can’t hold your head up
because you can’t bear to look
when you just want to scream
because their words feel like hooks

don’t worry I’m here
i won’t let you fall
i’ll wipe your tears
i’ll be here through it all
i’ll always be true
i’ll be here forever,
and I’ll never leave you

[eliselovesmusic]

awwwww haha I actually quite like this

I like how the third and fifth stanzas rhyme.

It's 'technically' quite cliche, but I can get that past it because it's still nice. Not over-thought or too sappy (others will no doubt disagree with this)

I also like how the title makes me think that you're going to leave your boyfriend or whoever, but then it turns out to be a lovey-dovey kinda thing haha.

Nice avatar too :-)