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SeeYouSeptember
03/19/09, 06:18 PM
They all say hindsight is 20/20 but I wouldn't put my money on it.
Even if I won this bet I would lose myself because I doubted it.

I wonder why, I never see the glare in your eyes anymore.
It's like what we once had, had been lost in a sea of stories.
In a treasure chest. If I ever find it, my days would be lost.
Spending my time, when I could be finding glory in myself.
We see each other now and then.
Or is it me and I'm looking for you.
Opposite corner I stare at you and our mutual friends.
As if they planed to get us back.

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Because, friendships don't always last.

Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

We once ruled, we once ruled the mountains.
The hike so long and steep, I fell back to the bottom.
Where I would find someone else to hold my hand and walk me back to the top.
Hopefully, they won't let go, like you did when I needed you the most.
Across the mountains I'll see you again.
Remembering all the things we did as friends.
On the tops, I try to spot you there.
When I see you my jaw drops down the mountains, now I'll have to start again.

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Because, friendships don't always last.

Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.
Times have changed and so have you.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

I run to the ocean side and to the mountain tops
But the thought of you follows me there
I run to the ocean side and to the mountain tops
But the thought of you follows me there

Be grateful for the ones you have.
Times have changed and so have you.
Don't think about it, but always remember your past.
The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused.
Don't make the same mistake twice.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Be grateful for the ones you have.
Life this week has been hell.
Friendships don't always last.
I may look happy, But you forgot a major detail.
Life this week has been hell.

eliselovesmusic
03/19/09, 11:11 PM
Good. Not great. But good.

I personally like the last stanza the most... lol "The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused."
If you're saying what I think you're saying then for a 13yr old you've got chicks pretty much sussed out haha.

I don't get the thing about hindsight being 20/20... like 20/20 vision or what? I haven't heard that saying before.

SeeYouSeptember
03/20/09, 12:56 PM
Good. Not great. But good.

I personally like the last stanza the most... lol "The use of periods for emotions has gotten me confused."
If you're saying what I think you're saying then for a 13yr old you've got chicks pretty much sussed out haha.

I don't get the thing about hindsight being 20/20... like 20/20 vision or what? I haven't heard that saying before.

Hindsight, meaning "looking back" 20/20 means perfect vision. When you reflect on a situation, or "look back", you can see more clearly what you should have said, or done, than you could see when you were actually there, in the midst of it, at that time.

andrew4045
03/20/09, 01:03 PM
mad flow yo. however, i have 20/15 vision so i cant relate.

leifstar
03/20/09, 01:03 PM
sea* ;).


Overall for a 13 year old it was pretty good and impressive.

I enjoyed the very last line.

SeeYouSeptember
03/20/09, 02:49 PM
sea* ;).


Overall for a 13 year old it was pretty good and impressive.

I enjoyed the very last line.

Haha thanks, for the comment and telling me that. I guess that's what I get for not using spell check. Oh well, I fixed it.

leifstar
03/20/09, 04:30 PM
Haha thanks, for the comment and telling me that. I guess that's what I get for not using spell check. Oh well, I fixed it.

your welcome. I should elaborate a little more. I enjoyed the last line, just like how you ended. I can't really put my finger on it, I guess this wasn't helpful. But I just like how you ended it, it was a nice line.

eliselovesmusic
03/20/09, 05:29 PM
Hindsight, meaning "looking back" 20/20 means perfect vision. When you reflect on a situation, or "look back", you can see more clearly what you should have said, or done, than you could see when you were actually there, in the midst of it, at that time.


Oh yeap I get it...

And I agree with leifstar - the last line is a great way to round it off :-)

SeeYouSeptember
03/21/09, 06:27 AM
your welcome. I should elaborate a little more. I enjoyed the last line, just like how you ended. I can't really put my finger on it, I guess this wasn't helpful. But I just like how you ended it, it was a nice line.

Oh yeap I get it...

And I agree with leifstar - the last line is a great way to round it off :-)

Thanks guys, I guess you both really like the last line haha:-) This weekend I might improve some of the parts a little if I have time.

SeeYouSeptember
03/21/09, 08:32 AM
I made it into a full blown song.
hope you guys like it

eliselovesmusic
03/21/09, 10:59 PM
I made it into a full blown song.
hope you guys like it



oh oh oh Can ya put it on youtube or something and tell us where to find it?

SeeYouSeptember
03/22/09, 07:24 AM
oh oh oh Can ya put it on youtube or something and tell us where to find it?

Oh the lyric portion is written I'm working on the guitars/drums and such now.