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emodude21
11/11/05, 07:38 AM
this is my first song.

Why do you hide me? When all of your friends are near? Am I an embarassment? Are you ashamed of me? What's wrong with me? I know i have flaws. Buy why are you doing this. I think it's over. So say goodhight, say goodbye. I'm sorry but it's a necesscary part of life. I know i had flaws. I know most of them. Why did you hide me? Did you think i wasn't good enough for you and your friends. We did we date. We never really talked. You never said you loved me but i loved you.I loved you but did you love me? say goodnight, say goodbye, it's a necessary part of life. I loved you but i think i hate you. You hate, it's okay. i understand. It never really worked out, it was a mess-up from the start.

Tell me if you guys like this song.

ALI.v.s.FRAZIER
11/11/05, 08:40 AM
you might want to edit it

yaz
11/21/05, 04:34 AM
its kinda repetitive...but the basic point of the song is really interesting and i think if you tweak it a bit youve got a pretty good song on your hands