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para ser libre
11/14/05, 01:00 AM
everything you really want to do to a girl who fucked you over...
or at least hwat i wanted to do... haha!



tied up
with the eyelids pinned back
it's like your worst nightmare
and my biggest dream
all coming true at the same time
make sure I’ll save you for last
with my hands around your throat
i hope you remember theses arms are the ones
you always said kept you safe
what a sweet irony it's worked out to be
i hope you beg and plead
and try to get away
you always enjoyed a good fight
but I’ll make sure that you’re the one done
and I’m winning this time
please, come on girl
give me the satisfaction
beg me for your last breathe
beg me to make it quick
so you don't have to hurt anymore
no, I’m sorry
I’m making this dream into fantasy
taking your life is a reality
everything you loved is over and done now
so come on girl give me the satisfaction
let me watch you back down, screaming and fighting
let me hear you try to scream
helps not coming
I’m gonna win this fight for the first time

a speedo model
11/14/05, 08:14 AM
it's ok, kinda dark and depressing. but i enjoyed it mostly. needs a little work though.

Blared
11/14/05, 12:21 PM
A little bit too rough and angry for me, but I guess keep working on it.

para ser libre
11/15/05, 11:32 PM
definitely a LOT darker then my usually


and yeah im still workign on it,,, ppsted an update to some projects im working on....

ArTkY_
11/16/05, 12:23 PM
Its extremely dark but I love it. It reminds me of Coheed & Cambria - Velorium Camper III: Al The Killer.

para ser libre
11/28/05, 08:52 AM
Its extremely dark but I love it. It reminds me of Coheed & Cambria - Velorium Camper III: Al The Killer.



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bump for everyone else let me know what ya think?!?!