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Chakote
03/25/09, 04:07 PM
VERSE 1:
it started out me in your class,
then i saw you look at me in gym class,
thought something was starting, but i guess you just wanted to see who i was, but you looked right through me.
I still look at you all the time, but you always seem to be looking at her, and she seems to talk to you alot, i guess i should've been more like that.

CHORUS;
Whoa Oh, i hope you know this,
Whoa oh, you were my everything,
Whoa oh, i've already seen you,
Whoa oh, and i can't stop looking at you, im so sorry.
Who oh, you've got her so i guess now its just too late.

VERSE 2:
I know you think im a freak, but i look at you all day through the week, if only you could see me the way i see you, maybe we could work this through?

yes i know she has a cute laugh,
but she doesn't care who's she's flirting with,
you're an easy target,
because you like her too.

CHORUS:
Oh Whoa, i hope you know this
Oh Whoa, you were my everything
Oh Whoa, i've already seen you at you, i'm so sorry,
Oh Whoa, and i can't stop looking,
Oh Whoa, you like her so now its just too late,

VERSE 3:
i don't care if she's beautiful,
but she's got some secrets of her own,
my night is over, cause im alone in this bed,
i dont care, if she's something, i wish, you could tell me, what i could change, to make you love me, oh whoa, i hope you know this, whoa oh you are something special, whoa oh i hope you know this.

SeeYouSeptember
03/25/09, 05:36 PM
:puke:

Troggy
03/25/09, 06:42 PM
Fact. Poems or lyrics posted in a color other than default are terrible.

Meenaghey Aym
03/26/09, 08:26 AM
i disagree. dont hate troggster. this piece however still sucks balls... hopefully you are really young and have room to grow up. yea ok maybe coloured font is a little distracting but wtf? the colours are there to be used mate. i say y not. however its the general consensus here to not give any critique on a thread if its coloured.. that also sucks balls... but not as much as this does.

whoa oh? oh whoa? wat is that? what are you trying to say in this whole thing? did u get hurt? then expand on that. use some imagery. dont be so straightforward leaving nothing to the imagination. maybe im harsh by saying it suks but i didnt say u suk just this work. work harder. then u wont make september puke.