Story of the Years

[Meenaghey Aym]

Story of the Years

~Verse~
Staring into moonlight fearing
This life I've all but decimated
Here torn between a shattered ending
And a question to end this prematurely
Now away stars fade into the morning
Come to pass another sleepless night
Familiar to my current calling
Stand solitary through this fight

~Chorus~
One way or another this quest will take my life
The lost time forgotten or a sudden flash of breath before my eyes
Witness nothing loosing everything breaking down in her vivid site
One day there will be reconciliation but could it be too late tonight

~Verse~
All but fallen to complete darkness
Enraged by dreams of broken days
And drink away a sorrow swollen
Could life be the price to pay
After waking to a cold sweat brow
From terrors filling my mind while I sleep
What some would call a simple nightmare
All to familiar, its all I dream

~Chorus~
One way or another this quest will take my life
The lost time forgotten or a sudden flash of breath before my eyes
Witness nothing loosing everything breaking down in her vivid site
One day there will be reconciliation but could it be too late tonight

~Verse~
A starless sky rains crimson tears
Failing hearts have taken root
A stronghold made of broken dreams
Subside all that I knew as truth
Her voice resounds in every dream
Her face reflected in every strife
As I run from constant affliction
Her scent behind the blade of a knife

[doves]

great work

[fishingthe_sky]

Hey man, I'm too tired to comment on this right now, but I'm writing this to remind myself to get to it before the weekend's over.

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[fishingthe_sky]

Staring into moonlight fearing
This life I've all but decimated
Here torn between a shattered ending
And a question to end this prematurely
Now away stars fade into the morning
Come to pass another sleepless night
Familiar to my current calling
Stand solitary through this fight
Props for using the word "decimated." The second half of this stanza is hard to make sense of, though. "Now away stars fade" is a phrase I can't figure out, and the last two lines seem sort of out of place. What is this "current calling" and how is it familiar? It's impossible to determine here.

~Chorus~
One way or another this quest will take my life
The lost time forgotten or a sudden flash of breath before my eyes
Witness nothing loosing everything breaking down in her vivid site
One day there will be reconciliation but could it be too late tonight
I think you mean losing in the third line. "Vivid site" sounds nice, but what are you trying to say?

~Verse~
All but fallen to complete darkness
Enraged by dreams of broken days
And drink away a sorrow swollen
Could life be the price to pay
After waking to a cold sweat brow
From terrors filling my mind while I sleep
What some would call a simple nightmare
All to familiar, its all I dream
The third line sets up a metaphor that you don't complete. I think that if you made an attempt to say what the sorrow is swollen like or swollen with, it would make for a better idea.

~Verse~
A starless sky rains crimson tears
Failing hearts have taken root
A stronghold made of broken dreams
Subside all that I knew as truth
Her voice resounds in every dream
Her face reflected in every strife
As I run from constant affliction
Her scent behind the blade of a knife
"Crimson tears" is a bit cliche. I also think you might be overdoing the dream idea here, since it's the main focus of the second verse. I'm intrigued by the last line, but I'm not sure it's quite what it could be. Maybe "her scent on the blade of a knife"? I don't know...


It's nice to see something other than the 5 song ep (not hating on it), shows a little bit more creativity in your language and images.