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Vanity__Dearest
11/16/05, 01:35 AM
This song was written for someone i'm extremely close/in love with. it's basially pretty cut and dry. a few deep things, but very simplistic thought. i know this forum has been pretty dead,but if you guys could comment...it's my first song for a whole month...just give it a chance. thanks people.

The Amor Confides

Tell the words to her woozy footsteps.
Speaking behind this, the words sear on the back of her frozen neck.
The spots left to be worn in, she steps her feet in the sand, and beats the patterns

1 to 4. Propositions of solid memos to the choir.
Sing our frozen chant, as the day tips itself from the month of twelfth.
To the first, and health singes itself against our cheeks.

In the dead of winter, the sparklers lit the cinders against the edges of the barrel, and they watched the ends of the world for a moment of heat.
They pause, as the spots of the ocean not crusted by ice run their course against their legs.
The hands fitted together like pieces of a puzzle, and he kissed the frost from her forehead.

There is so many things they had to worry about. But in this moment, they held each other as if they were the only section of heat left to be near of.
The beginning of this new year seemed convinced by the plane passing overhead. They were bound to dig each other out of the holds. Speaking so many words, there were only a few that would hold true now.

She locked his lips, and mouthed a silent memory slowly inside him. The days of sexual intention warped them into this weary, weakened body. But it was theirs. And they shook their lips, their hips as if they couldn’t stand to be apart.

1 to 4. Pick yourself up, and we pieced together our cold brave hearts.
Don’t hold me like I’m your only one. Just hold me like I’m your last.
These eyes, see way too much for their own good. What they have seen….we can’t ever find again.

There’s this mystery down the shoreline, where the men smell of sunlight, and the earth smells of death. But here, on this beach, the first of January, he held her hands like a sunrise, so short, but so enduring

I love you, like love is my last offered emotive.

a speedo model
11/16/05, 07:52 AM
really fucking good!! i liked that alot. good job, man.

lovely864md
11/16/05, 12:23 PM
wow, this couldve been very cliche and it wasnt, it was good. kudos.

Vanity__Dearest
11/16/05, 01:25 PM
thank you, you two.

it's one of the first few songs i've actually been proud of

de la sympathie
11/16/05, 02:50 PM
Matt, I always love your stuff. This one was no exception. Excellent imagery.

Vanity__Dearest
11/16/05, 11:20 PM
thank you shauna. you get some inspiration..and it's the best songs...i hate writing out of my ass.

btbam > you
11/16/05, 11:54 PM
dude, i love it. where's the love song about me?

SLADE775
11/17/05, 09:43 AM
Finally a decent song in here.

Good job. I like it.

SC0926
11/17/05, 01:32 PM
awwww Matt its very good.

nobodysmonkey
11/17/05, 02:05 PM
I love it. I swear, I'm not biased.

Vanity__Dearest
11/17/05, 03:34 PM
I love it. I swear, I'm not biased.
you just might be
dude, i love it. where's the love song about me?
it's on it's way...it's actually being sung by peaches on her next cd.
Finally a decent song in here.

Good job. I like it.
thank you so much slade. i still love you bud, no matter what.
awwww Matt its very good.

thank you sarah.

nobodysmonkey
11/17/05, 03:55 PM
you just might be

it's on it's way...it's actually being sung by peaches on her next cd.


A. Whatever, its still good.

B. Actually, its being sung by me during our next plan.

Vanity__Dearest
11/17/05, 04:05 PM
A. Whatever, its still good.

B. Actually, its being sung by me during our next plan. i have to say, proud of this one.

plans. oh you weirdo's.

Hilikus
11/17/05, 04:19 PM
wow this is excellent. One thing that i really like about this one is the repeated imagery of cold and ice. things like that.

Vanity__Dearest
11/17/05, 04:19 PM
thank you good sir : )