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mr hughes
04/06/09, 09:38 PM
The words that I gasp for but cannot say
get lost in my lungs and fade away.
I reach out across the universe,
but things just go from bad to worse.

(Chorus) "repeat after second verse"

I choke on my mana so pass me some wine
the peices get stuck in my heart and my spine
oh crippled man what did you do to deserve this
Your words were the coal and your heart was the furniss.

My heart is crippled with a leppers sting
oh God bring me the cure to this thing
a dim light bulb flickers as I rech the replace it
it's faded away... it's to late.... I can't save it.

thespearkid
04/06/09, 10:04 PM
It's just sort of, blah. Nothing really fascinating going on.

mr hughes
04/06/09, 10:16 PM
It's just sort of, blah. Nothing really fascinating going on.
I know I just wrote it for a speech class at school over night and I wish I would of worked on it harder. lol

xmy.only.exitx
04/07/09, 02:37 AM
you will only be forgiven your awful spelling by saying its your individual style.

mr hughes
04/07/09, 08:50 AM
you will only be forgiven your awful spelling by saying its your individual style.
lol well it is. :3