Writers Block With a Readers Freedom

[lostfear]

hello all, I used to post in here a lot. it's been a while. I write, sing and play guitar for Maine Pop Punk band "Connery" myspace.com/conneryrock

this is a song I'm working on; if anyone likes it enough, I'll post a demo of it.

Cheers,

-Jake

Write me off and erase me again
I’m the letter you never sent
Please don’t settle for less
Please don’t make me guess

Frustration. Situation. Can’t seem to keep calm
Hesitation Explanation for what’s going wrong

Rough seas; you’ll be the last one to wait for me
And I can’t save you from the fray
It’s today! We start this over
Burn another four leaf clover
Stumble through your lines
Watch as this declines

Read into it
You’ll find you were wrong about me
I’ll never quit
Won’t stop, won’t stop till you see

Write me off and erase me again
I’m the letter you never sent
Please don’t settle for less
Please don’t make me guess

Tell me please; don’t act so blind if you see
And I won’t be there to guide your way
Hear you say! Come a little closer
You’ll do anything to expose her
You always seemed to kind, Pause, then hit rewind

You’re just another snide remark
In the novel Where I’m the bookmark

You’re just another cavity
led heart, yet you still fight gravity


And I! won’t last
Another second I'm standing here
For I! fight back
When your true intentions become clear

[ArTkY_]

This has nothing to do with anything, but Your Voice vs The Speakers is a damn good song.

[lostfear]

thanks dude!!

[lostfear]

Bump de bump?

[silvercyanide]

You always seemed to kind, Pause, then hit rewind

I was just scrolling down to look at the comments and noticed you used the wrong form of to/too. Please fix =)


led heart

And is this supposed to be lead, as in the element?