save it for your therapist..

[nervous-lines]

"Save It For Your Therapist"

what's up with yuor so-called perfect life?
you told me i was lame
why do you lie to your friends, saying-
"oh, we're still together, we're so happy, i think he loves me"
but baby, you and i are a sinking ship
so tell your psychiatrist all about me
and tell her problems
come on and try me if you think i'm bluffing

to whom it may concern...

(chorus)
did you have an epiphany or a mental breakdown?
i'd like to think it was because of me
my gift to you, these bullets
and i'll just say "but officer she made me pull it"

if i only could disconnect my phone
i could end this suffering
that comes with your calls
and when you get to your therapist's office
don't forget to mention me in your statement
about how i was cruel to you and how it hurt

(repeat chorus)
next time you should think about how i feel
and how it hurt
you thought we were lovers
but love could never live in this God-forsaken wasteland

to whom it may hurt...

[a speedo model]

first off, the title isn't very good. please, change it. i kind of like the chorus but it, like the rest of song, needs work. it's very cliche at parts, and at other times just plain lame but there are some good ideas in there. just keep writing and working on it.