some dreams never die

[chickmgnt478]

well maybe tonight
i could sleep outside your heart
till we get this right
before we fall apart

cause theres still something here
that keeps me wanting more
the taste of you the air you breathe
this feeling that we cant ignore

cause some dreams never die
and we still hold on tight
to the day that we can finally be
and i wish that it could be
all that we need
is right in front of us
to make us believe

cause im so scared
to open up my heart to you
find a love thats true
well maybe you can be the one

to take my hand
take me away
to let me go, catch me when i fall
ill be here till the end of it all.



so its two versus and a chorus and 2 versus with the chorus again. Ive thrown it together in the last few hours so its not all set in stone. but pretty much its about just getting or taking chance after chance on the same relationship and not giving up. so thoughts????. i generally write from a pop music kind of mind so if that makes any difference

[chickmgnt478]

nobody?

[Kirsty.com]

i like it. i think its the subject, but i love the style. keep it up(:

[thespearkid]

i like it. i think its the subject, but i love the style. keep it up(:
What style?

[chickmgnt478]

style maybe cause i talked about it being more of a pop song maybe haha? im kinda lost as well

[Kirsty.com]

just cause your a he-she

[thespearkid]

... what?

[Kirsty.com]

He She.

[oh_how_lovely]

I think you should put an 90's pop beat behind it;

foreword: brackets are the backup singers.

Well maybe tonight (tonight)
I could sleep outside your heart (your heart!)
Till we get this right (get-this-right!)

LOL, with Backstreet Boys dance moves.

[chickmgnt478]

hahaha excellent idea. probably wont happen but you never know