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Wal-Mart Levi's
Wal-Mart Levi's
04/23/07 at 05:29 PM by AbsoluteINK

Wal-Mart Levi's
by
Kyle Howard



His fingers were like sandpaper icicles on her chest. Two of the snaps on the western shirt her aunt gave her for her seventh birthday were torn off. Breathing will never be this difficult again except in fits of passion. Flashbacks arenít only experienced by war vets.

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07:23 PM on 04/23/07
blink182baboon
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Wow, that was really quite beautiful.
09:01 PM on 04/23/07
shadowofmyself
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Sad, but very effective. I love how the idea of the icicles ran through the whole story.
10:05 PM on 04/23/07
guitarsmash0r
count it.
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I have goosebumps.
11:05 PM on 04/23/07
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"She accidentally knocked Furball, her stuffed seal, off of her bed and wanted to apologize, but language was now a foreign concept. The only things she knew were those icicles and that whistle. She will loathe every boy who tries to love her. She will break their hearts and they will secretly hate her."

That is a fucking line right there.
07:18 PM on 04/24/07
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That was one of the best short stories I have ever read.
09:19 PM on 05/11/07
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babyg703 : way to keep it simple
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Julia Conny : that's actually 4 fucking lines

Are you people stupid?[rhetorical]
02:09 PM on 08/16/07
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Wow. Very nice. I really really like it. No. I love it.
02:02 AM on 01/12/09
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This was pretty penetrating. No pun intended. The pace of the story was smooth yet somewhat frantic... kind of like a dreadful memory.

It's not in a circumstantial sense (I hope not), but I feel like I can relate to this.
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