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"Birds" or "We're As Big As Giants, But We Still Can't Climb This
"Birds" or "We're As Big As Giants, But We Still Can't Climb This
01/30/09 at 03:24 PM by TK
So the panels decayed
on top of stripped rooftops.
All of the cars drove away,
and left us with empty parking lots.

Our seats,
they were mounted
in wet cement.
And what of our actions?
They became the drying winds.
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03:33 PM on 02/01/09
lew_1987
The desperation's gone.
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I actually like the longer version, because some of the metaphors in the shorter version are a bit too vague, so the longer version paints a better picture. I would swap the endings around though, and have the ending from the shorter version as the ending to the longer version. Good job though, I enjoyed reading that.
06:33 AM on 02/02/09
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awwh i like this. :)
very very good.
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