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Nicky ( SomedayTheFire) and I made a deal that if he posted 1 poem, I would post three...
here is his beautiful poem :D
http://www.absolutepunk.net/journal.php?do=showjournal&j=9712#e 109052
And here are my three for ya! Upon Nicky's request!

And I haven't finished this one yet...
I like that you say we instead of you and I
I like that you’ve taught me to hold my head up high
You make me giggle in ten different ways
And I really do love all of our days
I’m smiling at the sight of your words...


You always bring it back to that
Never completely explaining yourself
I say it’s just not something I excel at
And you say it’s something I need to work at
One day you call it adorable;
That shyness I can’t quite defeat
Then the next day, it’s just horrible
You make me feel so incomplete
So when I can’t overcome it, you get irate
And when you look at me like that;
I melt, I sink, I disintegrate.
Either way, I don’t need that
Not from you, my supposed soul mate


I can’t escape the loneliness you bring
I can’t avoid the songs you used to sing
I can’t blame you for everything;
After all, you’re just another human being,
But why is it when I hear you sing,
My heart disintegrates, and I’ve nothing left to bring?


You say you want to get away
I laugh and say you’re crazy
One thing I hope you get in your head
Is that I wanna be you’re baby.

Thanks to Nickels for posting his poem and for making me post mine....

He’s making you nervous with all his wit in all his ways
You love everything about him, and he can tell by your gaze
He’s giving you the signs
And you’re reading them slowly as he sings his rhymes
So he croons about a girl whose eyes shine with hope
And how her gorgeous smile makes his heart rate slope
A girl whose thoughts are deep within her soul
With a spirit of joy she just can’t control
A girl who loves to live her life
Oh how he wants to make her his wife
She’s everything he wants
He’s everything she needs
And then all at once you see
That girl is me.

It’s tearing at the seam
It’s chipping from the wall
I hold my head and scream
In the process; I fall
I won’t get up; I can’t
I’m decaying from the core
I won’t give up; I can’t
Where’s my something to live for?
I take it up to Him
I’m giving all I’ve got
I don’t know what else to do
Cause the enemy’s found my weak spot
This should of been my debut
Instead it’s my demise
At this point, it’s broken glass
And, I’m done with all the lies
Stop questioning believing
Listen and you’ll hear
Stop answering the deceiving
‘Cause he’s causing you to veer
Now open up your ears
The one you needs’ right there
Let go of all your fears
Just give them up in prayer