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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/23/10, 05:07 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,791
very impressive man. my only thing is that the...
very impressive man. my only thing is that the direction of your poem is so advanced and ambitious while your rhyming is just sort of awkward, making it a little odd. you use basic level rhymes like...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
07/23/10, 01:46 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 911
ok guys, tone it down. i realize this is from a...
ok guys, tone it down. i realize this is from a while ago but i never responded and i dont wanna give the impression that im avoiding any type of response due to the harsh and unjustified words of...
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Forum: News
05/25/10, 12:54 PM
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Replies: 165
Views: 9,266
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/17/10, 06:03 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 403
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/13/10, 03:58 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 911
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/13/10, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 911
i completely disagree with matt chylak. fuckin...
i completely disagree with matt chylak. fuckin awesome dude, i really liked it cuz i personally connected with it. very cool poem, i like that end to, ery abrupt to conceptually repetitive lines...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/09/10, 06:44 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 488
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
05/06/10, 05:04 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 488
I'm in a dark, dark dream
It’s like rain in the winter, it’s like licking ice in the dark, it’s like tasting everything so naturally, like you want to spit it out, I feel stones in the wind, and from rubble to light, I feel...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 08:09 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 676
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:46 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 290
Hey Lipstick
Hey lipstick, you looked worse than you ever did
I’ve got a lullaby stuck in my teeth, you are the jar to my lid
I undress you under a scarlet hue, burning the sky in a darker blue
Than I’ve ever...
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:40 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 676
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:35 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 442
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:32 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 611
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:21 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 802
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/26/10, 04:15 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 515
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Forum: Personal Life
04/26/10, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,433
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Forum: Personal Life
04/22/10, 06:33 PM
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Replies: 59
Views: 3,209
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/17/10, 12:16 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 695
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/17/10, 12:13 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,238
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/17/10, 12:11 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 418
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
04/17/10, 12:08 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 901
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
03/02/10, 07:31 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 944
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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry
03/02/10, 07:26 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 2,179
This poem is raw and beautiful and I so can...
This poem is raw and beautiful and I so can relate it's ridiculous. I write too and I feel like I was reading something I had yet to write. That sounds arragont ha but that's what it reminded me of....
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Forum: Music
03/02/10, 06:42 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,279
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Forum: Personal Life
02/28/10, 07:00 PM
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Replies: 80
Views: 3,209
just do something about it dude, take a chance,...
just do something about it dude, take a chance, its not like your ruining a friendship and its not like it would be awkward if you get turned down cuz shes not in any of your classes. go up to her,...
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