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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05:07 PM - 07/23/10
Replies: 14
Views: 2,312
Posted By Ripmedj
very impressive man. my only thing is that the direction of your poem is so advanced and ambitious while your rhyming is just sort of awkward, making it a little odd. you use basic level rhymes like...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01:46 PM - 07/23/10
Replies: 12
Views: 1,120
Posted By Ripmedj
ok guys, tone it down. i realize this is from a while ago but i never responded and i dont wanna give the impression that im avoiding any type of response due to the harsh and unjustified words of...
Forum: News 12:54 PM - 05/25/10
Replies: 164
Views: 11,501
Posted By Ripmedj
Gettysburg College
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06:03 PM - 05/17/10
Replies: 1
Views: 441
Posted By Ripmedj
very awesome man
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 03:58 PM - 05/13/10
Replies: 12
Views: 1,120
Posted By Ripmedj
I'mAGetUpKid!!!!!
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 03:57 PM - 05/13/10
Replies: 12
Views: 1,120
Posted By Ripmedj
i completely disagree with matt chylak. fuckin awesome dude, i really liked it cuz i personally connected with it. very cool poem, i like that end to, ery abrupt to conceptually repetitive lines...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06:44 AM - 05/09/10
Replies: 4
Views: 585
Posted By Ripmedj
i will respect your advice as soon as you begin to see language as a being rather than a methodical structure. what is more creative than creating? answer me that 182
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05:04 PM - 05/06/10
Replies: 4
Views: 585
Posted By Ripmedj
Itís like rain in the winter, itís like licking ice in the dark, itís like tasting everything so naturally, like you want to spit it out, I feel stones in the wind, and from rubble to light, I feel...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 08:09 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 5
Views: 849
Posted By Ripmedj
well your name is idealist. i think its cool, i think its vicariously sufficient, selling me sold, so suck it
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:46 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 0
Views: 314
Posted By Ripmedj
Hey lipstick, you looked worse than you ever did
Iíve got a lullaby stuck in my teeth, you are the jar to my lid
I undress you under a scarlet hue, burning the sky in a darker blue
Than Iíve ever...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:40 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 7
Views: 730
Posted By Ripmedj
nice and sweet and short
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:35 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 1
Views: 457
Posted By Ripmedj
wow thats very impressive. the imagery and word paring is advanced and compositionally successful. i like the transition you made to deliver the line 'so i can rest like an ocean slipping into a...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:32 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 2
Views: 706
Posted By Ripmedj
love those two first lines. its funny man and sweet
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:21 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 11
Views: 941
Posted By Ripmedj
i like it dude. i think simple is what your going for so trite imagery will be comforting to the reader, because well, its familiar imagery. I like the repeating chorus i assume and i love the title...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04:15 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 6
Views: 729
Posted By Ripmedj
puffin L's haha
Forum: Personal Life 04:10 PM - 04/26/10
Replies: 25
Views: 2,877
Posted By Ripmedj
i second carolina.alex's advice
Forum: Personal Life 06:33 PM - 04/22/10
Replies: 59
Views: 3,773
Posted By Ripmedj
dude. stop.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:16 PM - 04/17/10
Replies: 4
Views: 720
Posted By Ripmedj
nice man
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:13 PM - 04/17/10
Replies: 16
Views: 1,419
Posted By Ripmedj
its okay dude. you need to take more compositional risks. and the font takes away the authenticity of your words
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:11 PM - 04/17/10
Replies: 2
Views: 487
Posted By Ripmedj
cool dude. favorite line: puddles of things i used to know
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 12:08 PM - 04/17/10
Replies: 12
Views: 1,298
Posted By Ripmedj
haha sick dude. and copying is the most sincere form of flattery
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 08:31 PM - 03/02/10
Replies: 9
Views: 1,046
Posted By Ripmedj
Very very good. Inconsistencies in line length is like sentence variety in prose. Keeps the reader focused and attentive. The thing about poetry, no rules, just originality.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 08:26 PM - 03/02/10
Replies: 24
Views: 2,313
Posted By Ripmedj
This poem is raw and beautiful and I so can relate it's ridiculous. I write too and I feel like I was reading something I had yet to write. That sounds arragont ha but that's what it reminded me of....
Forum: Music 07:42 PM - 03/02/10
Replies: 29
Views: 1,609
Posted By Ripmedj
bought their album immediately after listening to like one song.. my favorite is the earth but their other songs are sick too
Forum: Personal Life 08:00 PM - 02/28/10
Replies: 80
Views: 3,777
Posted By Ripmedj
just do something about it dude, take a chance, its not like your ruining a friendship and its not like it would be awkward if you get turned down cuz shes not in any of your classes. go up to her,...


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