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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/02/13, 06:12 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 290
Posted By matmanok
Trees

Why do you want to hold it?
It’s melting in the cauldron of bad ass hopes and dreams.
Now that branch is colder
Stiff back getting older than the oak from which I came.

What a lot of...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/01/13, 09:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 449
Posted By matmanok
The Rider

Here comes the rider, right into view
Here comes the rider and you are a fool
Here comes the rider, right into view
No use in running, cause he will catch you
In some bother, with shit on your...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/10/13, 02:42 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,258
Posted By matmanok
really cool. great work man

really cool. great work man
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/10/13, 02:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 553
Posted By matmanok
But by having my thoughts expressed clearly in...

But by having my thoughts expressed clearly in pen
Maybe you’ll see this as a new start and not as the end

Really good effort. Well done and keep writing!!!
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/10/13, 02:28 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 298
Posted By matmanok
What we've got

Bells are tolling, heads are rolling
economies of scale you bastards.
Life was sweet, rain down on me
and put the androids out to pasture.

Dead citadels and nasty tales
of London fields spent on...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/08/13, 02:34 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 696
Posted By matmanok
Thanks for the advice.

Thanks for the advice.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/04/13, 02:26 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 268
Posted By matmanok
Total Troublemaker

Psychic fruitcake, living in bad taste.
Come back to us.
Supple madman, subtle as a man can
be with us.
Strong ox weakling, mentally preaching
love to us.

Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/04/13, 02:14 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 606
Posted By matmanok
Hi cut!print. It reads as a complaint and the...

Hi cut!print.

It reads as a complaint and the narrator appears to be helpless. Whilst it works very well, I felt that it would be enhanced if the narrator illustrated his awareness of the situation...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/04/13, 01:59 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 696
Posted By matmanok
Thanks for the feedback lads

Thanks for the feedback lads
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 11:16 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 214
Posted By matmanok
The Quick Mistakes

See that pill rolling on the floor?
I dropped it and I'm going to drop some more.
Hear that sound strumming out free?
I made it just for you and me.

Look at us - we are great.
Just someone's quick...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 11:10 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 696
Posted By matmanok
Home Sweet Home

Your heavy heart and this god damn town,
all out of heroes and so full of clowns.
Some get by but the rest just try to
stop your world from turning around.

Litter and drugs and double yellow...
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:06 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 8,341
Posted By matmanok
cheers for this

cheers for this
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:05 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 8,341
Posted By matmanok
dreadful album. He should stop!

dreadful album. He should stop!
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:04 AM
Replies: 147
Views: 29,616
Posted By matmanok
really enjoyed this review, Will buy album. was...

really enjoyed this review, Will buy album. was undecided
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:02 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,506
Posted By matmanok
LOve this album, Great review

LOve this album, Great review
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:02 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,320
Posted By matmanok
NOt bad album. Your review is honest and mostly...

NOt bad album. Your review is honest and mostly accurate
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:01 AM
Replies: 131
Views: 15,710
Posted By matmanok
excellent review - took me back to 2007. Lost my...

excellent review - took me back to 2007. Lost my copy of this album, off to buy a new version right now!
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 11:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,105
Posted By matmanok
Tunes!!! Good review

Tunes!!! Good review
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 10:59 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,745
Posted By matmanok
really good EP. Good review

really good EP. Good review
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 10:59 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 666
Posted By matmanok
really enjoyed this. good pointers

really enjoyed this. good pointers
Forum: Reviews 04/03/13, 10:57 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,201
Posted By matmanok
good review! Love Inhaler

good review! Love Inhaler
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 08:04 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 460
Posted By matmanok
A bit clumsy - read it loud to yourself. It...

A bit clumsy - read it loud to yourself. It doesn't flow
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 08:00 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 515
Posted By matmanok
Some solid life observations here

Some solid life observations here
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 07:59 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 941
Posted By matmanok
The first line is brilliant. Really grabbed me....

The first line is brilliant. Really grabbed me. Thought the end came too quickly - it didn't fit with the form of the piece. Really good work man.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/03/13, 07:55 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 606
Posted By matmanok
A good attempt at depicting the relentlessness of...

A good attempt at depicting the relentlessness of working life and the doomed desire to leave it all behind. Perhaps you could add some irony in to provide a contrast.


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