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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/19/07, 03:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 473
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
I see what you mean. I need to have better...

I see what you mean. I need to have better topics.. i know. Thanks for the help though! ^_^
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/18/07, 04:06 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 473
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Any way i could fix it?

Any way i could fix it?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/14/07, 06:03 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 473
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
I see what your saying... Thank you for reading...

I see what your saying... Thank you for reading though. Ill work on the continuous feel. It seems to kill what i was going for.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/13/07, 05:28 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 473
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Tale of the used

I just wrote a random song for my band and i was told it went with what else was written. so heres half of whats written and i will mabey add the est when i feel like typing.

Tale Of The Used

I...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/23/07, 11:04 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 451
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
I wrote the first verse and wanted to go on. I...

I wrote the first verse and wanted to go on. I see what your saying though. It started to go downhill though. Im shocked its not as cliches as some of the others, and ill take that as a complament...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/23/07, 09:27 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 451
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
I'm working on it. Thank you for reading though.

I'm working on it. Thank you for reading though.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/22/07, 04:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 451
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Hehe Thank you! Still working on it though :-/

Hehe Thank you! Still working on it though :-/
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/22/07, 04:18 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 480
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Its really short. U should write more. Other than...

Its really short. U should write more.
Other than that its good.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/22/07, 04:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 451
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Saw You Fake It

Saw You Fake It


Dragged out of the amazing hallucination,
Dreams ripped out from under me,
Left to be a bystander,
As you go and overlook what we use to be,

So alone after a short time,
Crying...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/18/07, 01:18 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 304
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Thank you. I'm trying to get better little by...

Thank you. I'm trying to get better little by little. I get what you mean by how im lacking in experence. Its just the way I have been feeling lately. Thank you again for the advice! ^_^
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 06/17/07, 05:41 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 304
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
A Crazy Little Thing

Sitting silently,
Contemplating my every move,
Trying to find the words to say,
To say I love you,

Not concealing my feelings,
Finally having a realistic idea,
My only true emotion,
My heart and...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/23/07, 04:37 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
wow.... i feel so out of it. im only 14..but i...

wow.... i feel so out of it. im only 14..but i write like a 9 year-old ^_^ thats my job though
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 05:16 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
i know what your saying about the comercial!!! i...

i know what your saying about the comercial!!! i try to type like a normal person but its going to take some getting use to
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 05:14 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
right... when people tell people they suck they...

right... when people tell people they suck they get better...... i thought my first poem was horrible.... but i posted it so i can get advice on how not to write in such a crappy way...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 05:09 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
I think u learn better when you dont hold...

I think u learn better when you dont hold back.... if u say it was great and it sucked you learn nothing...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 05:03 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
c this is y i began to post my poetry and...

c this is y i began to post my poetry and lyrics... i knew people would be harsh...as their friends... i got to say... there takeing it a little too serious.... but still thank you everyone... i dont...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 04:53 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
vandalsandquinn gave you good advice too...

vandalsandquinn gave you good advice too >.> u didnt thank her.. i agree with her when she said that sad poems turn out like crap.... i can see what she means... like how horrible mine was...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 04:49 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
My head hurts after all this... people were...

My head hurts after all this... people were helpful with mine... im here to learn how to expand my writing style... thank you everyone thats been heping me. Thats the point of posting your work... to...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/22/07, 02:16 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
Im sure alot of people are around my age... Some...

Im sure alot of people are around my age... Some people are more mature than others... just like i spell like a second grader....

Its a joke between me and her... and no i cant spell for my...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/21/07, 06:21 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
cuz dats how i roll... how bout this...

cuz dats how i roll... how bout this fluffykins... now ppl knoo u and can complain on a more personal level....
I knoo u didnt write it all... skating buddy did 2! :-)
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/21/07, 05:12 PM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,587
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
ngoc... CAAAAAAAALM! listen ppl... my poetry sux...

ngoc... CAAAAAAAALM! listen ppl... my poetry sux and so does hers... im 14... nd im sorry... ive been depressed alot lately.... im suure most ppl r at some time in their lives r... nd.... u lost me...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/17/07, 03:09 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 704
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
uh... i think i get it.... :-) I liiike it! i...

uh... i think i get it.... :-) I liiike it!
i liike how u used sumin different to tell bout himm..... kinda... isnt wutt this is about...??
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/12/07, 05:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 395
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
:-) i liike when u write liike dat... mine is...

:-) i liike when u write liike dat... mine is sucky... u should comment itt... :/
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 05/12/07, 05:20 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 395
Posted By ItzEILEEN92
omfg! NOVACANE! I fuckin loove it helena! ...

omfg! NOVACANE! I fuckin loove it helena!
She’s gone numb,
"But isn’t that what she wanted?
Not to feel the pain,
Not to remember you.
Well she got her wish.
She’s numb.
But she...


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