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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/01/11, 12:30 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 418
Posted By em.e
i liked it but the pattern was a bit all over the...

i liked it but the pattern was a bit all over the place, but sometimes that works. I don't know that it does here.
In particular I think the last verse needs revising and you need to make it a bit...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/30/11, 10:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 390
Posted By em.e
hard to read how? the font you mean or the words...

hard to read how? the font you mean or the words themselves?

thanks for taking the time. lol someone was obviously bored, i've had times where i've wanted to comment on everything but refrain so i...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/30/11, 02:32 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 284
Posted By em.e
Shaking planets

this is one of the first poems I ever wrote about 6 years ago.



The planets shaking are alligned,
They set out the road in your mind,
You donít much enjoy the beginning,
Middle and certainly not...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/30/11, 02:27 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 390
Posted By em.e
Guilt From Nothing

The Guilt From Nothing.

18.5.08.
Take a pill to function,
Caffeine to wake properly,
I don't function 'til at least midday.
My brain is rotting,
It takes more time everyday to rev up,
Cut open...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/30/11, 02:22 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 503
Posted By em.e
lol well my mate liked it and that's the point! :)

lol well my mate liked it and that's the point! :)
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/29/11, 07:50 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 570
Posted By em.e
D, can you be a bit more helpful or not...

D, can you be a bit more helpful or not bother?
i think you were expecting 'closed' because that's a very over used line.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/28/11, 07:57 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 692
Posted By em.e
that inspired me a lot. i know that the two i...

that inspired me a lot. i know that the two i have posted on here have had similar themes, but not all are like that, they were just my two most recent pieces...maybe i could put them together? i...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/28/11, 07:55 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 380
Posted By em.e
thank you so much, i appreciate that.

thank you so much, i appreciate that.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/28/11, 07:54 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,109
Posted By em.e
i disagree but i don't want to argue. there is a...

i disagree but i don't want to argue. there is a million 'genres', we don't know them all. that's all i say. i respect your opinion.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 09:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 915
Posted By em.e
loved There is a gun to my side and its still...

loved


There is a gun to my side and its still smoking
The smell of gunpowder is just intoxicating
This blood on my hands, where’s it from?
And why are you so cold here in my arms?


i like...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 09:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 561
Posted By em.e
i really like the chorus, and the verses are...

i really like the chorus, and the verses are great too but i reckon there could be one more verse to tie it up, it seemed to end a little suddenly. i guess the 'story' itself was a littlle lacking,...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:34 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,109
Posted By em.e
lol i like 'teenage angst shit' and maybe you do...

lol

i like 'teenage angst shit' and maybe you do too. the trouble is people try to put poetry/lyrics into their OWN genre and if they can't see it there they can't see it at all [im not saying this...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:29 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 495
Posted By em.e
i love it. all of it. i get it and i love it. not...

i love it. all of it. i get it and i love it. not much more to say! the structure is simple, nothing wrong with that, the message is crystal clear and it's written simply but cleverly.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:27 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 900
Posted By em.e
hard to read, you need to put spaces b/w verses,...

hard to read, you need to put spaces b/w verses, but i really like it. reminds me of some of the older stuff i used to write, and still do ocassionally. lots of emotion is great and it's totally...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:25 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 460
Posted By em.e
didn't totally grab me but i do like the There...

didn't totally grab me but i do like the

There it is,
Everything you missed when you blinked
A wisp of your life
Don't oblige,
Tell me with tenor and clarity,
In the dim, dull light

be interesting...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 692
Posted By em.e
Death

28/1/11
Death, do I float through the ceiling?
Do I sink through the floor?
Do I enter blackness?
Am I consumed by white?
I am so terrified of all the answers
but donít you know secrets are bad...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/11, 08:19 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 380
Posted By em.e
Jesus

28/1/11


Does Jesus regret it now?
Does Jesus see it as a waste of time?
ĎCause He died for our sins and here we are
all sinning once again, what a thank you gift
for three days dead, well thatís...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/16/11, 11:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,208
Posted By em.e
its okay for a newbie, but i dont know how long...

its okay for a newbie, but i dont know how long you've been writing. i like the theme though, and look forward to the new version.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/15/11, 04:31 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 639
Posted By em.e
i actually don't mind this, it's a bit sloppy but...

i actually don't mind this, it's a bit sloppy but tha'ts fine, i like the imagery and what i perceive as the idea[seems open to interpretation]. i dont necessarily thinkk poetry has to be so...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/15/11, 04:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 503
Posted By em.e
My rock

MY ROCK.

My rock is always there. My rock is always open. My rock is brave. My rock always listens. My rock is always honest. My rock is altruistic. My rock is strong. My rock never judges. My rock...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/15/11, 04:21 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 528
Posted By em.e
thanks a lot. i think long after we never met...

thanks a lot. i think long after we never met kind of means the real us never met, if that makes sense.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/13/11, 10:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 385
Posted By em.e
this is interesting..but it still sounds a little...

this is interesting..but it still sounds a little disjointed..i dont totally get it..i do like it but i think it needs polishing a bit..i like 'i've lost a reason...no key to fit me', thats...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/13/11, 05:59 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 792
Posted By em.e
i dont completely get it but i do like it! ii...

i dont completely get it but i do like it! ii like the style, it's kind of different, it sounds great.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/13/11, 05:56 PM
Replies: 51
Views: 3,623
Posted By em.e
love the theme, love the way it's written, it's...

love the theme, love the way it's written, it's great. love the 'it shouldn't take a crash to stop/an avalanche of fright...' line, fantastic.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/13/11, 05:53 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 343
Posted By em.e
i like it, it's short and repititve but done...

i like it, it's short and repititve but done well. i particularly like the way you rhyme patience with invasion/evasion..


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