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06:49 AM on 04/23/12 
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nickmoebus
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Zach, a friend of mine on this site, came up with an idea for a song. Though I strayed away from the initial idea I am happy with what I wrote in its place. It's about someone who died and although they did indeed die they for some reason are still on the earth, unable to interact with anyone or anything. Living an endless life alone and depressed, watching the world around prosper while being stuck there.

A single flash my dying moment
My breath has passed without an omen
Now I'll walk this endless ground
Finding where my heart is bound
I feel them but they're never seen
transparent tears what can they mean?
I'm dead and gone
My essence quelled
So memory why are you there?
(pre chorus)
So cold
none can see me I'm too blurred
You'll grow old
Not knowing I'm the wind you've heard
hear my agony
(chorus)
I never asked to remain below the clouds
I have passed I shouldn't be around
But here I am to watch these streets
observing life from others peak
My days are now an endless stream
And memory... please let me be
(verse 2)
I speak to all but never listen
The words I've slurred can't start a rhythm
The life I've known is over now
you've found new things to lift what's down
I feel them drop from off my face
transparent tears are such a waste.
I'm never gone
I view it all
this is my persistent hell
(pre chorus)
Alone
These ever seeing eyes can't burn
I'll outgrow
Every name I've ever learned
I bask in agony
(chorus)
I never asked to remain below the clouds
I have passed I shouldn't be around
But here I am to watch these streets
observing life from others peak
My days are now an endless stream
And memory... please let me be
(bridge)
darkness demand me!
I need my silhouette to fade
What is there to do
But yearn for death's serenade
darkness demand me!
Take me somewhere anywhere
What is left for me to do?
I saw the light but never flew
(chorus)
I never asked to remain below the clouds
I have passed I shouldn't be around
But here I am to watch these streets
observing life from others peak
My days are now an endless stream
And memory... please let me be
(end lines)
Transparent tears what can they mean?
I've been ignored at every scene
Transparent tears are such a waste
But until true end... their permanence I taste
(end)
09:14 AM on 04/23/12 
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zachblinkfan12
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Nice one and his friend Zach :)
09:42 AM on 04/23/12 
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nickmoebus
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Nice one and his friend Zach :)

It turned out pretty great I think. I'm glad you like it too man



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