[TimmyVilgiate]

by Timmy Vilgiate
VCVCBE


V1
You asked a question
You were throwing a stone
But you mean much more to me
Then broken bones
You made decisions
You were building a home
But oh it's just walls
If you build it alone

C
Ooh, ooh, ooh, you always run, you always fight
Ooh, ooh, ooh, slinging shots into the night

V2
You ran in puzzles
And you hid behind poems
But letters unsent
Will only turn into ghosts
These bullets you fire
Never turn into roads
They're just divisions
You've scorched in your soul

B
But I'll stand and watch your weapons turn to walls
Hidden in these silences as your bombs begin to fall
You love the way it feels to be out here all alone
But no one should have to make it out here on their own

E
And it's not a question of how or of why
It's not a matter of space or of time
Call and I'll answer, be there when you cry
Call and I'll answer, put a hatchet through this ice

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Bravo. I love the imagery used with all of the weaponry, very unique perspective on the topic as well. The first verse is by far my favorite part, it sucked me straight in.

[TimmyVilgiate]

Thanks a lot! :) I've never been to sure of how I felt about these lyrics since I wrote them, I'm glad you connected with them.

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Originally Posted by TimmyVilgiate

Thanks a lot! :) I've never been to sure of how I felt about these lyrics since I wrote them, I'm glad you connected with them.

Yes sir. I like the simplicity of it but I also believe this could become much more than what it is if you wanted it to.

[TimmyVilgiate]

Thanks a lot! When you say, "if could become much more than what it is" what would you suggest? I'd like to to become more if it can.

This is the song on the acoustic guitar; which I don't normally play (it's usually electric mandola) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZ7IQilVuCY&feature=plcp

[The_godly_jacob]

This is pretty bad

[TimmyVilgiate]

Originally Posted by The_godly_jacob

This is pretty bad

Because of...? What could be done to improve it?

[Yanko]

I like it! Very smart writing.

[JamieLyrics]

very nicely done. I enjoyed it

[kenned]

Originally Posted by JamieLyrics

very nicely done. I enjoyed it

I love the imagery used with all of the weaponry.

[punkcrap]

The 1st verse and the bridge are my favorite parts. Well written and sustain the whole theme of the lyrics

[TimmyVilgiate]

Thanks everyone, for the feedback! Glad the lyrics and their imagery are enjoyed.

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Originally Posted by TimmyVilgiate

Thanks a lot! When you say, "if could become much more than what it is" what would you suggest? I'd like to to become more if it can.

This is the song on the acoustic guitar; which I don't normally play (it's usually electric mandola) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZ7IQilVuCY&feature=plcp

Sorry it took so long, when I get to a computer I will listen and tell you what I think! I'm on my phone right now. And don't listen to that godly_jacob person he said the same thing about my writings and wouldn't even give an explanation, he think he's just trying to start arguments or something.

[TimmyVilgiate]

Alright! Thanks, just give it a listen and tell me what you think. Whenever we actually record a full version of it, I'll be sure to send it to you. Yeah, I looked at his post history...I think it's pretty safe to say he got banned? I'm not sure.

[TimmyVilgiate]

This is a recording of the song being performed live: http://cliffletters.bandcamp.com/tra...l-difficulties

The volume pedal seriously didn't go well..so it sounds nothing like dubstep.but. Hopefully you'll enjoy it.