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07:43 PM on 04/09/12 
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nickmoebus
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Lately I've been tying to challenge myself when it comes to writing poetry. I'm doing this by writing a stupid, waste of time poem about silly/inappropriate things, basically whatever i want. These are NOT SERIOUS and do not deserve to be judged with a serious mind. It is ONLY for stupid fun. If you know what the poem is about message me and tell me. here it goes..

Heavy gasping breaths collide
With my feet in hastened stride
What Iíve just seen made mockery
Of any beauty I could see
The wearing down from lengthy years
Has riddled memory with fears
For there is not a hope to make
That can erase my sightís mistake
When I see the garnered soul
Divergence takes away control
Iíve allowed the scar to form
It moves me from what once was norm
Maybe on a later day
I can recollect the way
I used to view my eldest blood
but for now my choice is run
06:23 AM on 05/07/12 
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for 'stupid fun' it's a good piece of work!
07:15 AM on 05/07/12 
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for 'stupid fun' it's a good piece of work!

Thank you haha when I have absolutely no inspiration it's the next best thing. I prefer my serious writing but oh well.
06:51 AM on 05/13/12 
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It's about seeing your Dad naked and running away scared/scarred. Amirite?


Everything you said was correct except it's about a grandparent. The eldest blood line is the clue haha thanks for participating. no one else has even tried!



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