Liked all three in their own ways, about the whole people getting bored with the same rhyme scheme in verse one I usually run two rhyming schemes simultaneously if I feel it's getting a bit repetitive, a bit like this:
Dad didn't show up to graduation
What was it this time Dad, happy hour?
Living in a fucked up nation
My outlooks beginning to sour
with this fucked up generation
But through my lyrics I feel empowered
that can't even imagine or have an imagination
These verses start forming in the morning before I've even showered
let alone a fascination
Aiming to devour
involving solving the investigation
The false ideology's of anyone in power
among their poor fellow peers observation
And from the bottom looking up I'll make them cower
as if its not some type of obligation
It's my time now, your biggest mistake was letting me grow empowered
to not fix what was once known as a creation.
It doesn't really tie in with the original verse but it was 5 minutes work, what can you expect eh :P |
That was pretty dope & thank you for the feedback.
Thank you to everyone else as well :)
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