Originally Posted by Trashcore
I had trouble reading anything after you admitted to enjoying W!TG. What redeemable factor do you find in them? Between jordans terrible screaming and annoying singing, and josh' mundane guitar playing, I can't find anything enjoyable. They aren't even that catchy. It's obvious they're trying their damndest to fit into that catchy genre, but they fall about a football field short.
Jordan can't really hold a note (and I'm pretty sure Josh is the screamer, but I could be wrong) and they aren't super amazing, but I just find them better than Breathe Carolina, maybe because they were the first band in the genre that I actually liked. I can't be sure, for some reason. They just appealed to me in someway. It might be their lyrics.
Originally Posted by npmshah
While i agree with your opinion on this album, i couldnt really get into your writing style. It seemed so informal. You used personal pronouns without a clear reason, mainly.
I can work on that, but it's the most natural for me.