Originally Posted by Dymytry Vance

Oooohhh 1ND13 CR3D!

now now, don't lose your temper.

Originally Posted by more heart

No, you can't. For Today is straight up metalcore and The Great Comission is more along the lines of deathcore. Not really close to post-hardcore.

Whatever. What about, Hot Cross, Blood Brothers, andddd.... early FBTMOF.

Originally Posted by handlikesecret

now now, don't lose your temper.

Grawwwrrrrrrruicallllcryyaaaaiiiiii eeeeeoooooooo

Originally Posted by handlikesecret

now now, don't lose your temper.

Don't worry, he copied that from me.

Originally Posted by Dymytry Vance

i think i can consider them p.h. if sksk can be...

sksk maybe, but for today and the great commission are nothing near post hardcore.

Originally Posted by Dymytry Vance

Whatever. What about, Hot Cross, Blood Brothers, andddd.... early FBTMOF.

I had trouble reading anything after you admitted to enjoying W!TG. What redeemable factor do you find in them? Between jordans terrible screaming and annoying singing, and josh' mundane guitar playing, I can't find anything enjoyable. They aren't even that catchy. It's obvious they're trying their damndest to fit into that catchy genre, but they fall about a football field short.

i love this cd, it's at least baby steps in the right directions for them

While i agree with your opinion on this album, i couldnt really get into your writing style. It seemed so informal. You used personal pronouns without a clear reason, mainly.

Originally Posted by Trashcore

I had trouble reading anything after you admitted to enjoying W!TG. What redeemable factor do you find in them? Between jordans terrible screaming and annoying singing, and josh' mundane guitar playing, I can't find anything enjoyable. They aren't even that catchy. It's obvious they're trying their damndest to fit into that catchy genre, but they fall about a football field short.

Jordan can't really hold a note (and I'm pretty sure Josh is the screamer, but I could be wrong) and they aren't super amazing, but I just find them better than Breathe Carolina, maybe because they were the first band in the genre that I actually liked. I can't be sure, for some reason. They just appealed to me in someway. It might be their lyrics.

Originally Posted by npmshah

While i agree with your opinion on this album, i couldnt really get into your writing style. It seemed so informal. You used personal pronouns without a clear reason, mainly.

I can work on that, but it's the most natural for me.

Originally Posted by npmshah

While i agree with your opinion on this album, i couldnt really get into your writing style. It seemed so informal. You used personal pronouns without a clear reason, mainly.

My thoughts exactly. I'm glad you (lemontie) gave this album a fair review, but your writing could use work.

Originally Posted by lemontie

Jordan can't really hold a note (and I'm pretty sure Josh is the screamer, but I could be wrong) and they aren't super amazing, but I just find them better than Breathe Carolina, maybe because they were the first band in the genre that I actually liked. I can't be sure, for some reason. They just appealed to me in someway. It might be their lyrics.



I can work on that, but it's the most natural for me.

that's good. Try to break out of your natural habit. Avoid use of personal pronouns unless you are sharing a personal anecdote that ties into the review (example: cleverly comparing the album to a personal experience of yours).

Thanks for the criticism. I appreciate it.

A joke.

Thank you for actually writing a legitimate review of this album instead of just bashing it.

Originally Posted by Trashcore

I had trouble reading anything after you admitted to enjoying W!TG. What redeemable factor do you find in them? Between jordans terrible screaming and annoying singing, and josh' mundane guitar playing, I can't find anything enjoyable. They aren't even that catchy. It's obvious they're trying their damndest to fit into that catchy genre, but they fall about a football field short.

I don't like W!TG. What the hell are you talking about?