12:37 PM on 03/09/10 |
Awesome album... weak review. "Boooom, Blast & Ruin" might be the best song on the album.
Some criticisms:
That first paragraph is full of generalizations that I don't think you can justify.
You don't consider someone AS something... you consider them TO BE something.
"Claim universal acclaim" sounds awkward... so does "The only song on the album which does not compare to the immense heights of this album" - you used the word album twice in that sentence and you didn't really have to.
Your closing statement is flat. Hit 'em with something snappy.
That said, you seem to know much about the band - which is a good thing. Just need to work on your writing fundamentals. Keep at it! | | |
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