[020jeffs]

When I be ripping and tripping I'm never slipping or giving.
I'm living illen and killing the villains that fill in the chilling.
Of a million children beginning a spinning meaning.
Now I'm sitting and hitting the written sh*t that I'm spitting.

Yet not forgetting that I let in the setting that's hot and wrecking yet in.
Every second betting I've never met him and I will get him.
Cretin that's heading towards my mind I find I'm blind.
To the guy that's behind the fine design and I will try to fly high.

Not a screaming demon or beaming visions of leading heathens even.
I'm a speaking beacon teaching and preaching the meaning.
Deepened by people and people's recent achievements.
Leave it to me and believe it can be a proper lot of evil grievance.

Messenger letting ya get in the set of killers.
Mental fluid is ruined I'm chewing secrets I'm a spiller.
Revealing the meaning of living easy I'm chilling.
Killing delusions of movements through time which seems to be idyllic.

[020jeffs]

Alt Esc, if you read, please comment :D

[0b4m4]

It sounds like one of those rap songs I'd actually listen to. One that actually means something.

[SLoT]

It sounds like a heavy simplistic beat would suit this well. I dig the many rhymes not just following a natural flow you throw in a ton of words with syllables that play around not just the entire word. I dig that. It kind of reminds me of Twista's stuff, not lyrical content, just flow.

[BlackHeartBook]

Very cool, I could feel the beat and the words were raw

[mjrebel]

thats some good flow man.

[BrianHadsell]

I like the lyrics. I get the feeling it is a hip hop style song that I would like to listen to. My favorite line is, "the guy that's behind the fine design and I will try to fly high." This seems like a song about a person that is in an inner conflict, I hope everything works out.

[Stella Jones]

I like it :)

[Mer]

Great flow. Bump some beats and rap it kid. I'd listen.

[skibler]

Although I like most all genres I will be honest to say I am not a big Rap fan....but....I think I could get into just reading the lyrics as opposed to hearing them sung.....this piece sounds good.

[Spartan2011]

Great flow, keep up the good work

[Saint_February]

not a rap fan but i sense you are talented. the rhymes are good. I like that you didn't use a bunch of one syllable rhymes like you see in a lot of songs today. In any art even RAP sometimes there is no need for too much rhyme. but good job :)

[Icarus.Moonchil]

That flow was totally sick dude. I wondered sometimes if certain words necessarily fit into the sentence, but it doesn't really matter. I'd love to hear this.

[Deluminate]

flow was insane bro, keep it up