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05:16 PM on 03/21/10 
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020jeffs
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When I be ripping and tripping I'm never slipping or giving.
I'm living illen and killing the villains that fill in the chilling.
Of a million children beginning a spinning meaning.
Now I'm sitting and hitting the written sh*t that I'm spitting.

Yet not forgetting that I let in the setting that's hot and wrecking yet in.
Every second betting I've never met him and I will get him.
Cretin that's heading towards my mind I find I'm blind.
To the guy that's behind the fine design and I will try to fly high.

Not a screaming demon or beaming visions of leading heathens even.
I'm a speaking beacon teaching and preaching the meaning.
Deepened by people and people's recent achievements.
Leave it to me and believe it can be a proper lot of evil grievance.

Messenger letting ya get in the set of killers.
Mental fluid is ruined I'm chewing secrets I'm a spiller.
Revealing the meaning of living easy I'm chilling.
Killing delusions of movements through time which seems to be idyllic.
05:16 PM on 03/21/10 
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Alt Esc, if you read, please comment :D
07:02 PM on 03/21/10 
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It sounds like one of those rap songs I'd actually listen to. One that actually means something.
06:20 AM on 03/22/10 
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It sounds like a heavy simplistic beat would suit this well. I dig the many rhymes not just following a natural flow you throw in a ton of words with syllables that play around not just the entire word. I dig that. It kind of reminds me of Twista's stuff, not lyrical content, just flow.
04:33 PM on 03/22/10 
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Very cool, I could feel the beat and the words were raw
08:12 PM on 03/23/10 
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thats some good flow man.
12:48 PM on 08/02/12 
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I like the lyrics. I get the feeling it is a hip hop style song that I would like to listen to. My favorite line is, "the guy that's behind the fine design and I will try to fly high." This seems like a song about a person that is in an inner conflict, I hope everything works out.
04:39 PM on 08/04/12 
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I like it :)
09:52 AM on 10/12/12 
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Great flow. Bump some beats and rap it kid. I'd listen.
10:04 AM on 10/12/12 
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Although I like most all genres I will be honest to say I am not a big Rap fan....but....I think I could get into just reading the lyrics as opposed to hearing them sung.....this piece sounds good.
08:21 PM on 10/15/12 
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Great flow, keep up the good work
07:19 PM on 10/22/12 
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not a rap fan but i sense you are talented. the rhymes are good. I like that you didn't use a bunch of one syllable rhymes like you see in a lot of songs today. In any art even RAP sometimes there is no need for too much rhyme. but good job :)
06:05 PM on 10/23/12 
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That flow was totally sick dude. I wondered sometimes if certain words necessarily fit into the sentence, but it doesn't really matter. I'd love to hear this.
05:36 AM on 10/29/12 
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flow was insane bro, keep it up



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