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02:09 PM on 05/09/11 
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_Ghost_
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rocky mount, North...
Male - 19 Years Old
Psycho
They call me a psycho, yeah they call me crazy
Never feel like working, yeah they call me lazy
But I swear I never let it phase me
This world will always continue to amaze me
Let me tell it like this, I get money for washing a dish
But I never really go, cause it really ainít my wish
Got fired yesterday, but I donít give a shit
Working for the man is something I donít get
This job is a piece of shit
And I donít want to commit
In this world I donít fit
Canít find a person to match my wit
Alright I admit, that I am lazy just a bit
Not motivated enough to wear an outfit
But yet I can sit on my ass and write a verse like it ainít shit
Look at my wrist and yeah sometimes they wannaí be slit
But my hands are tired and calloused
Looking for an outlet or some kind of ballast
But my mind wanders far from near
The world would be better if I could disappear
Come back with new shit and get ready for my world premiere
Its time I took my life by the reigns and learn to steer
If youíre thinking youíre gonna get in my way, Iíve learned to veer
Driving away from all this hate and fear
With my luck I fall asleep and hit a deer
But it wonít come near
The damage Iím doing to your ego dear
It will take an entire astronomical year
And a team of medical engineers
To repair what I have done
When you look at me you squint like Iím the sun
On that note bitch Iím out of here, Iím done



02:25 PM on 05/09/11 
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crackedthesky
cause when I fly solo I fly so high
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Gladstone, MO
Male - 25 Years Old
Too predictable and too immature. Also a little bit repetative (might as well have called it "Lazy" instead of "Psycho"). But your structure is pretty strong and the words connect well enough. Keep writing.



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