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10:38 AM on 08/05/11
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Minty Mouth
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I agree that your writing style is brilliant. I do think, however, that you could make use of a pair of slightly sharper editing scissors. The beautiful writing is a little lost in an abundance of adjectives and your sentences sometimes wander off track. I think you could have cut the length of the review significantly without losing any of the power of your observations quite easily.

I'll definitely be listening to the album now, though.
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