I feel like this review is overflowing with details and footnotes that don't directly pertain to whichever points you are trying to get across. I don't want to say it is a bad review, because you did touch on most everything a review should contain, I just feel it was a little clouded and that that took away from the critique in a negative way. The ratings are fair though, but I do disagree with your thoughts on "Endless Sky", as I think it was one of the album's stronger tracks.
this album certainly took me by surprise. i was expecting mediocrity but it surprisingly surpassed expectations. maybe it's how that first breakdown in Gnars Attacks sounds EERILY similar to TDWP's last breakdown in Html Rulez D00d? almost too close for comfort. but Digital Renegade is easily the strongest track, while Endless Sky is right behind it. Oliver's voice in the chorus is actually fantastic, he literally croons and it rivals the capabilities of singers like Craig Owens. the album's far from perfect, but tastefully enjoyable. it's got the right amount of pop and the right amount of (somewhat?) heaviness.