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07:04 AM on 01/18/13
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Deathco_019
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Wayyyyy too much history in the opening paragraphs. The first paragraph should draw the reader in and, from there, go into detail about the album. You could easily convert all the lineup changes into one paragraph. Hell, two sentences ever.
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