[Emotionless]

You don't remember me
But I rermember eveything you did
And I lie awake and try so hard
Not to blame you

I believe in you
I'd give up everything
to be with you

I saw you mourning our love
ANd I had to touch your hand
I hope you know I still love you

I look in the mirror
And see your reflection
There are so many things inside
That feel out of place

Your memory is taking over me

[Memphisonfire]

Been there too...only time mends things.

[cut!print]

I like the compassion in it, however, I felt there was an over-usage of 'you' . Not necessarily that you said it several times but that you used that single word as the whole rhyme scheme of the song, but I dig the message conveyed (I tried really hard to not use the word 'you' the whole time haha).

[Albionpunkband]

looks good

[FeedMe]

like the flow

[JackyKerouacy<3]

I liked the feeling it conveyed.