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Amy Sommers
02/14/05, 04:25 PM
Feeling especially emo on V-Day?
Stoked because your best friend's girlfriend is going to hook you up with her cousin?
Pissed because your mom wont let you go out with your boyfriend on Valentine's Day because "its a school night"?
Want to tell that special someone how much they mean to you?

Get it all out and win some free stuff at the same time...

Starting today, February 14th, post an original poem beginning with the words ROSES ARE RED (http://www.rosesareredmusic.com) in the replies. The most creative, original entries, picked by the band, will win swag from Trustkill Records and Roses are Red. One GRAND PRIZE winner will a Roses Are Red gift bag including tickets to any show in the next 6 months (festivals excluded).


The winners and their poems will be announced on rosesareredmusic.com (http://www.rosesareredmusic.com) and here absolutepunk.net. The contest ends at 11:59pm PST on Tuesday (2/15/04). Start Posting!

yc_soco
02/14/05, 04:29 PM
not to bash this site, but what the hell does this have to do with music? i thought it was music news

Nate_RAWKS
02/14/05, 04:30 PM
That's a pretty cool idea if i didn't suck at life and poetry i would have tried to write something.

Pat Marquez
02/14/05, 04:31 PM
not to bash this site, but what the hell does this have to do with music? i thought it was music news

Not everything is about music. And technically that does have to do with music, are you not familiar with the band Roses Are Red?

Yamikellyn
02/14/05, 04:31 PM
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
This band sure is awesome
And its members are too

Vinny’s the frontman
Sings his heart out
Gets the crowd involved
That’s what it’s all about

Mike L bangs the skins
Kickin it in the back
His skills on the drums
Give me a heart attack

The brothers Gordner
Shred on the guitar
Dudes’ skills could make the crowd jump
Even if they played the Sitar

Last but not least
Bassman Ed’s always scarred
Bruised and broken
From rocking too hard

Who else is playing with them? Nobody Cares.
Well you’re right and wrong
But don’t worry about it
Just sing along

“I’d paint your hair…Crimson red”
Don’t have Conversations? It’s alright
Because Roses are Red
Is playing in our town tonight!

Cabsausr
02/14/05, 04:33 PM
Yeah, I was waiting to see if anybody even knew about this whole poem contest thing. Anyway, here's the one I wrote:

Roses Are Red with thorns for every season
They poke and we bleed without any reason
Our hearts are aching with innocence not sin
A hankering to be loved and love within

A Rose absorbs what we possess inside
Passing each season with beauty and pride
Witness to feelings we won't admit exist
Thriving to acquaint us with those we resist

A Rose serves it purpose for each day it lives
It berates us with beauty and helps us forgive
For those who've done wrong and bear this gift of love
They've seen the unknown and gave the Rose thereof

A Rose is still gorgeous until its decay
Taking all the passion those of us portray
It dies with the allure it had the first day
Roses Are Red and delightful any day!

gjn519
02/14/05, 04:33 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you

ajustrun22
02/14/05, 04:35 PM
roses are red
violets are great
i like yellowcard
but not as much as tate

Nate_RAWKS
02/14/05, 04:37 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you


HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :appl:

CaughtInAMoment
02/14/05, 04:38 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you


this person wins.

Ruggiero2oo8
02/14/05, 04:42 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
i love this band
and YOU SHOULD TO

brunzzzzzz
02/14/05, 04:42 PM
Roses are red,
Pussies are pink,
Right now I have no girlfriend,
So tonight I will drink.

here4ulaw
02/14/05, 04:42 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you

winner

gjn519
02/14/05, 04:42 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
i love this band
and YOU SHOULD TO

LAME!

kevanu
02/14/05, 04:43 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
too bad you didn't get any
cause i'm a jew
LOL EMO

SummerPerfuma
02/14/05, 04:43 PM
roses are red, much like your eyes
but can you tell me one thing..
how long does it take to recover from a night like this
should i remind you, you left your consience on the dance floor
and those three drinks you had, they wernt really a cure
and i've got a secret, i've always wondered what it would be like to be like you
i bet he would tear you up and spit you out, and then back again
just becuase he likes the way you taste at four in the morning
i bet you daydream all the time, i bet you like the sneaky type
i bet you're not really this timid or shy but that look in his eye is unfarmiliar
i hope you still have that taste in your mouth, but more bitter this time around
so let yourself take control of this situation, was it really as bad as you said
three days and six minutes from now you wont even remember who he is
jet black hair, striking green eyes, was it really that much of a surprise
it just took this long to find out something truely unexected like this could never come from you
i've observed the smallest of things, like how you move from across the room

Signals Corrupted
02/14/05, 04:43 PM
roses are red
like going on tour
you better lock up your shit or else you'll get robbed
and then you'll be poor

kevanu
02/14/05, 04:44 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
in soviet russia
heart breaks you

livethesounds
02/14/05, 04:44 PM
well i actually read the message at rosesareredmusic.com, and it said to write about love problems if u got them...and id have to say i unfortunatley have them.

roses are red like the blood from my wrist
that i would rather shed then go through this
weve gone to far and i dont need a reason to wish this never happend
tears drown my eyes and my heart is black
never knowing if we'll be back
dont say your sorry ive heard it far too many times
and now the only thing i hear are restless windchimes
days spent feeling so alone
every smile you fake could be your last, i spend another night at home
the only time of comfort come
when were talking one on one
you tell me we'll be together again
the doubts race as my eyes pour
i am lost without you
i am feeling so scared
i dont know what to say
anymore
life gets harder everyday ill do my best to show her
that im making it ok, but i want to tell her
everything i feel inside, knowing how it makes her cry
so i hide it back inside
if i cant say it to her than who?
everyting i wish i could say fell between the skies we stare into
honestly i know there is a chance
of again holding her in my hands
to again feel the love you brought
this is all ive ever had
this is all i want
i pray for the day she comes back into love's sight
and promises me she'll tell me everything tonight
another chance to start again/
to feel the joy come from within
to think of what id say then makes me crazy
stay for a while because we might be on to something baby.

it dosent follow any type of pattern, and it probably sucks but i tried to incorporate sum rar songs into it. yes my life is sad but im comforted by knowing roses are red will be back in spring next month. rar rules!

gjn519
02/14/05, 04:44 PM
roses are red
too bad you didn't get any
cause i'm a jew
LOL EMO

Now that's quality poetry!!!

still
02/14/05, 04:45 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
gonnorhea is contagious
so watch who you screw.

FrustrateMyFoes
02/14/05, 04:47 PM
Roses Are Red, she said with a frown,
As I watched the blood drip from her hands to the ground.
Gripping the stem as hard as she can,
the sharp thorns peircing the palm of her hand.

Roses Are Red, she said once again,
paying no attention to the pain she is in.
Walking down the sidewalk leaving a trail,
the bright crimson color of a love turned frail.

Roses Are Red and and so are her shoes,
as she wanders this world not knowing what to do.
Missing a smile, a kiss or a word.
"I love you" as sweet as a song from a bird.

Roses Are Red is a song that she sings,
as she ponders this life and the tears that it brings.
Lovers on the street remind her of you.
Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue.

Jake Garcia - 2/14/05

kevanu
02/14/05, 04:47 PM
roses are red
my anus is too
my boyfriend dumped me
now i dont get it in the butt

cht9989
02/14/05, 04:48 PM
Roses are red.
My emotions are blue.
It'd be even worse,
If I had to put up with you.

SummerPerfuma
02/14/05, 04:48 PM
number two
i hope you can enter more than once, haha..

Roses are red andI am all mechanical.I've got no friends or a heart. I tryed over and over to bring you to your knees, but thousands don't seem to crawl this low so I let numbers speak for me. So I count paychecks in time and oxygen that I spend on you and if I'm not broken then I know I'm still alive. And if you're not crawling I know you're still here. And if we're not touching, I know I'm not dreaming. And if this shatters I know I shook the table. So read your books and catch up on your missed lessons you know we're going to burn each and every page. So commit this to memory, we never really had much to show. This will be the flame of the candle that burnt out just like you did in the streets of Miami.

still
02/14/05, 04:49 PM
roses are red
blood pours from my bed
ever since hanson
i cant stop cutting my head


so deep, so so deep.

rebelaznboy
02/14/05, 04:49 PM
roses are red

made a mistake telling you how i felt
should have kept my feelings underground
cause now we are only avoiding each other

how i wish things could go back to normal
back to the way it use to be
how we could talk to each other w/o me being afraid
how i could always look foward to seeing your smile

whenever i see you now
i get such a bad vibe
like i did something wrong
but i can't quite fit the pieces to our puzzle

don't know what the future may bring
as i sit here writing this about you
so badly i want to call you
to try to figure out this puzzle of ours

seans seatbelt
02/14/05, 04:50 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
in soviet russia
heart breaks you

for SURE the best one i've seen.

kevanu
02/14/05, 04:51 PM
roses are red
so is my dogs penis
animal sex is cool
lol am i rite?
guyz?

edit: last entry :( cause i'm too emo on v-day.

still
02/14/05, 04:52 PM
roses are red
your mom's thighs are blue
ever since i raped her
she won't call me boo :(

tshorty528
02/14/05, 04:55 PM
roses are red
and violets are blue
but i can see every color in you.
ok i'll admit it, you're mostly golden.
with a hint of white and blue.
they're swirling around, deep in your veins
i'd spend my life finding every shade
my brush is still dry and it's begging to paint
but i'll never reach an art quite like your grace.
if my heart was a pallet i'd only paint crimson
of a thick and dark texture, saturated with love

i seem to have the most trouble with sincerity
near impossible to express the depths of truth
but believe me art is hard.
and believe me so is love.
and believe it or not so is life,
becuase life is the art of love.

arrows and hearts and angels and poems.
all too classic romantic
traditions and customs and valentines verses
i'm begining to find that most words are worthless.
and even if I'm merely wasting my breath,
my color my paper my pen my pad,
i'm only doing my best
and here i am anyways spinning for you
just like i promised i'd do.
there's just something in you that gives my words color.
that brightens my entire existence.
you light up this word, neon sign in my chest
persistence, persistence, persistence.
belief, maybe next time the shade will have color.
or the shape will start to form.

i seem to have the most trouble with communication.
near impossible for a works voice to cut through.
but believe me art is hard.
and believe me so if life.
and believe it or not so is love,
because love is the art of life.

nature's so simple, so colorfully true
roses are red
and violets are blue
i just hope i can bring color to you.

CT-Tim
02/14/05, 04:59 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
in soviet russia
heart breaks you


Hahahaha, amazing :) I don't think 99.99% of this site's visitors will get this joke, but I loved it.

Roses are red,
Violets really aren't blue.
Violets are purple.
Here's scene points for you.

oddhowweshake
02/14/05, 04:59 PM
roses are red
yes this is true
you probably though i was going to use the word "blue"

but you thought wrong
i'll try to keep this anything but long
maybe i'll turn this into a song

lalalalalalala

now im singing to you
about everything you never knew
all the things we couldnt do
and how my hearts turned black and blue

cuz your roses are red
mine are just a shade of grey
i remember every thing you've said
and what i've always wanted to say

this is getting way to emo for me
but if i continue i might get on MTV
and stand on TRL next to carson daly

now i'll try some underground rap
the ass of the bitches is what i like to tap
im not good at this so i'll just step back
almost as bad as a old fat mans crack

how about we now try an old western tune
where the dears and the antelope sleep in my room
i clean their shit up with my ol' dusty broom
and pick up my fiddle and sing me a tune

i know i said the same word twice and i hope its okay
dont get mad and dont be gay
i hope no one takes that comment the wrong way
if they do oh well, its something i had to say

well now im done and these roses have lost red
cuz with a matter of time they're sure to be dead
but as of right now, the colors are still in my head
cuz when its time was up, its where the colors fled

so have a happy valentines day,
i hope this makes you smile
until next time...


which might be awhile

fin.

drivthru182
02/14/05, 04:59 PM
Roses are Red
This day is a shame.
This seems good in theory
But on paper, its lame.
I've tried to be poetic
boy, have I failed.
Give your mom a hammer
for tonight she gets nailed.

aolsux
02/14/05, 05:03 PM
roses are red
violets are rusty
god do i want to be really lusty
this fucking v-day
yes, hip hip hooray
i want to get laid this holiday

Darren McLeod
02/14/05, 05:04 PM
Roses are Red
Violets are blue
I wanted your sister
But I guess you will do.

Signals Corrupted
02/14/05, 05:07 PM
roses are red.

The Marc
02/14/05, 05:10 PM
Will everyone please just SHUT THE FUCK UP!?!!???

I'm trying to eat here!

skaught
02/14/05, 05:12 PM
roses are red
you say what you do
i'll piss you off
then tell me "fuck you".

noles05
02/14/05, 05:15 PM
Roses are Red.
Violets are Blue.
There's not enough room
To say how much I hate you.

Roses are Red.
Violets are Black.
I told you I loved you,
But I take it back

Roses are Red.
Violets are Dead.
How did this poem
Get in my head?

Roses are Red

Caleb Cattivera
02/14/05, 05:20 PM
AHEM *cough*

roses are red
and violets are blue
and i hope your panties are too
i like spaghetti
lets fuck

SonEric84
02/14/05, 05:25 PM
"Candy, Flowers, and Bleeding Hearts"

Roses Are Red like this valentine's heart
I'm bleeding for you 'cause you tore me apart
Ripped from the seams and taken for a spin
I'd give you anything if you'd let me win

Stitch me up because I'm breaking down
I'm smiling even less 'cause you're not around
Chocolates and candy won't make up for today
'cause I've never been as lonely as I am on this day

Roses Are Red like my love for you
but love songs and poems would never do
I'm thinking of new ways to express myself
so far everything I've thought of isn't good for my health

bullets and razors
rooftops and glass
on the outside I'm bleeding
on the inside I laugh
I know what you're thinking
it's not what it seems
I woke up with you in a bed of roses
but it was only a dream

hobotodd311
02/14/05, 05:25 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
in soviet russia
heart breaks you
ha ha ha. we have a winner! :)

AreTwoKay
02/14/05, 05:29 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you
Hahaha

ISDUS
02/14/05, 05:30 PM
"And If It Rains on Our Parade"

Roses are red
And we call it simplistic
The ocean that bled
And the day that we missed it

The water is colorless
Without a blue sky
Looking above it
And reflecting its light

And if gravity meant it
We wouldn't be here
So close to kissing
So close but never near

And you are just like the water
In which I would rather drown
Such a perfect exterior
But hedonistic inside

So the silent and vulgar
Will recognize your smile
But if tomorrow you mean it
I'll die for a while

Signals Corrupted
02/14/05, 05:34 PM
roses are red
i have an erection
you'll end up like this
if you dont use protection

specialeds281
02/14/05, 05:36 PM
Roses are red, like the blood on these seats, car crashed memory, end of the day, sunset green like your once life-filled eyes. Death of a loved one, in the figurative way, comes once a year with the pool of gasoline, ignite those swimming, kill the fish in the sea the only ones worth while are those on the lie filled land. see this moment through broken shards of glass, see your pathetic life in the empty flask. drown your problems in white rum, all those around you see you gasping for air. a fish that cant swim, darwinism will have its way, the best will move on to the land and youll be left to drown and once a year youll be remembered by many others like you, the fish in the sea, of gasoline, the ones that never make it out.

phoenixdown
02/14/05, 05:37 PM
Roses are red
Violets are cool
If you wrote a real poem
You are a tool.

apex
02/14/05, 05:38 PM
Hahahaha, amazing :) I don't think 99.99% of this site's visitors will get this joke, but I loved it.
the simpsons is underground?

kleswing
02/14/05, 05:42 PM
roses are red.
violets are blue.
JESUS is awesome
too bad you're a jew :shenlong_

great britian is awesome
the us ain't bad :flag:
i ain't getting some
at least i'm not canadian :canada:

:sex:
ME

PunkRocks
02/14/05, 05:46 PM
Roses are red,
As was my face,
When today I asked a girl,
To come over to my place.

But it wasn't a blush--
I don't stutter when I speak,
But my face is still red,
With a palm-print on my cheek.

Greg Dona
02/14/05, 05:49 PM
roses are red
my balls are blue
quit biting my dick
or ill fucking slap you
beautiful. you have abandoned conventional literary methods for, well, being an asshole. i like it.

Greg Dona
02/14/05, 05:53 PM
roses are red, much like your eyes
but can you tell me one thing..
how long does it take to recover from a night like this
should i remind you, you left your consience on the dance floor
and those three drinks you had, they wernt really a cure
and i've got a secret, i've always wondered what it would be like to be like you
i bet he would tear you up and spit you out, and then back again
just becuase he likes the way you taste at four in the morning
i bet you daydream all the time, i bet you like the sneaky type
i bet you're not really this timid or shy but that look in his eye is unfarmiliar
i hope you still have that taste in your mouth, but more bitter this time around
so let yourself take control of this situation, was it really as bad as you said
three days and six minutes from now you wont even remember who he is
jet black hair, striking green eyes, was it really that much of a surprise
it just took this long to find out something truely unexected like this could never come from you
i've observed the smallest of things, like how you move from across the room
plagiarism... rock on

projectmayhem16
02/14/05, 05:53 PM
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
This band sure is awesome
And its members are too

Vinny’s the frontman
Sings his heart out
Gets the crowd involved
That’s what it’s all about

Mike L bangs the skins
Kickin it in the back
His skills on the drums
Give me a heart attack

The brothers Gordner
Shred on the guitar
Dudes’ skills could make the crowd jump
Even if they played the Sitar

Last but not least
Bassman Ed’s always scarred
Bruised and broken
From rocking too hard

Who else is playing with them? Nobody Cares.
Well you’re right and wrong
But don’t worry about it
Just sing along

“I’d paint your hair…Crimson red”
Don’t have Conversations? It’s alright
Because Roses are Red
Is playing in our town tonight!your poem writing skills are only surpassed by Mr. Deeds.

Guy
02/14/05, 05:55 PM
roses are red
and my grundle hair is growing way too long
what exactly is the best way to go about shaving it?
these asstangles are totally killing my game!

cheeruptheEmo
02/14/05, 05:56 PM
roses are red
to match the color of your soft lips
parting to kiss my finger tips

id rather hear your voice
then to read your letters
about love and whatnot
but i swear this is all i want

your golden brown eyes and the way they skim the scene
to make sure that im still here
next to your side i fall
my dear,
even if i was to crawl
past theses reflections of the past

you make it worth while
in the end
you are my place to rest my head...


(that was so random and i made it up in like 2 mins...dont laugh too hard. haha cause i am...)

Guy
02/14/05, 06:00 PM
roses are red
to match the color of your soft lips
parting to kiss my finger tips

id rather hear your voice
then to read your letters
about love and whatnot
but i swear this is all i want

your golden brown eyes and the way they skim the scene
to make sure that im still here
next to your side i fall
my dear,
even if i was to crawl
past theses reflections of the past

you make it worth while
in the end
you are my place to rest my head...


(that was so random and i made it up in like 2 mins...dont laugh too hard. haha cause i am...)

I like the ashlee simpson rip at the end

Caleb Cattivera
02/14/05, 06:00 PM
roses are red
to match the color of your soft lips
parting to kiss my finger tips

id rather hear your voice
then to read your letters
about love and whatnot
but i swear this is all i want

your golden brown eyes and the way they skim the scene
to make sure that im still here
next to your side i fall
my dear,
even if i was to crawl
past theses reflections of the past

you make it worth while
in the end
you are my place to rest my head...


(that was so random and i made it up in like 2 mins...dont laugh too hard. haha cause i am...)

this is def the award for the emo bitch of the year...jk

volcom l stone
02/14/05, 06:00 PM
Roses are red,
Pussies are pink,
Right now I have no girlfriend,
So tonight I will drink.

hahahaha

projectmayhem16
02/14/05, 06:01 PM
"And If It Rains on Our Parade"

Roses are red
And we call it simplistic
The ocean that bled
And the day that we missed it

The water is colorless
Without a blue sky
Looking above it
And reflecting its light

And if gravity meant it
We wouldn't be here
So close to kissing
So close but never near

And you are just like the water
In which I would rather drown
Such a perfect exterior
But hedonistic inside

So the silent and vulgar
Will recognize your smile
But if tomorrow you mean it
I'll die for a whileI dont know if you wrote that or not but I dig.

SummerPerfuma
02/14/05, 06:02 PM
plagiarism... rock on
plagarism..?
that is over three years old.

ISDUS
02/14/05, 06:04 PM
I dont know if you wrote that or not but I dig.



...wow...hey...that makes my day...thnx...

Jac Vanek
02/14/05, 06:05 PM
Hahahaha some of these fucking rule. Now the people that actually take time to write emo poems look like tools. My favorite goes to:


AHEM *cough*

roses are red
and violets are blue
and i hope your panties are too
i like spaghetti
lets fuck

j2daedubblef
02/14/05, 06:18 PM
roses are red
so is lazzaras hair
john nolan shoulda never left the band
cause now they are worse than cher

roses are red
what a shitty group
there is no effort in this
cause i'd much rather win some poop

liberal slants,
neverending rants
dont you dare try to go against tate and take a conservative stance

welcome to abpunk
the site where yellowcard is labeled a step ahead
stop trying to get your scene points
cause the scene is officially dead.

KarolaBloch
02/14/05, 06:23 PM
Roses Are Red
like a
canopy of lesser value
nothing is really expressed
right.. on. told him about philiosophy
told him to get a grip of himself
it only lives in darkened waves of light
shallow yet forever engraved
"roses are red" it said across his side
they must come get us, before we speak
this light was off to start the day
wasn't too careful throwing it into reverse
start at quarter past five
better be something or say anything at all.

SAOSIN7years
02/14/05, 06:30 PM
Roses are red,
Scene kids are wack,
Why is Tate's crotch as flat as his back?

pine tree
02/14/05, 06:44 PM
Jet black hair
tight pants
and autumn leaves
Your wrists are a bloody mess
from wearing your heart on your sleeve.
you think roses are red
but they are actually dead

cheeruptheEmo
02/14/05, 06:44 PM
this is def the award for the emo bitch of the year...jk

what... and i didnt even think about the ashlee simpson deal. blah forget i even wrote that down. im so ashamed...

volcom l stone
02/14/05, 06:47 PM
roses are red
the most flaming of red
picked just for you
oh how they match your rosy cheeks
so come inside, it's cold my dear

roses are red
and this fire is oozing warmth
it fills the room where we sit
and gaze out the frosted window
snow silently falling

roses are red
and togther we lay
side by side coiled in blankets
i feel your heart beating
so soothing

roses are red
but eventually they fade
as will this dream
"open your eyes" you say
but i must resist
for it would be too devastating
to realize you don't even exist

make fun of me all you want :love:

abrandnewused
02/14/05, 06:52 PM
Roses are red
Violets Are Blue
Fudge is sweet
Here's some fudge

(hand your lover some fudge)

fullcollapse88
02/14/05, 06:55 PM
roses are red
like the sheets on my bed
after you bled.
i wish we stopped at head.

boyinastitch
02/14/05, 07:02 PM
roses are red
so is lazzaras hair
john nolan shoulda never left the band
cause now they are worse than cher

roses are red
what a shitty group
there is no effort in this
cause i'd much rather win some poop

liberal slants,
neverending rants
dont you dare try to go against tate and take a conservative stance

welcome to abpunk
the site where yellowcard is labeled a step ahead
stop trying to get your scene points
cause the scene is officially dead.

i enjoyed that one...mine is:


roses are red
such as the color of my dick
after my mother sucks it
and rubs it with her tit

ive spent years wondering
about the dreams i have at night
ones where im gay
and fuck deaf and blind guys

and the world doesnt understand
why im so fucked up
its because i havent jacked off in years
a wad of cum will soon erupt

so maybe roses arent red
its just all in our mind
this i have figured...
sitting naked eating pork rines.

eyeskill
02/14/05, 07:05 PM
Roses are red
And my heart turned blue
Thanks, I owe it all to you
You looked so good with your smile and the wink in your eye
I didn’t even see it coming, no one does
The next morning on the 14th
They found the body faced down, next to the promises you left behind
No fingerprints not even a clue, just the hope I lost that night
You’re so clever and certain with an attitude so cruel
Like a vampire you disappeared in the shadows of Sunday
If only you could taste the blood on my lips, I know you would
Now February bleeds on every 14th
With you hunting for the next heart
No ones every going to catch on, to the body count you piled up
So impressive, sweetheart

gjn519
02/14/05, 07:07 PM
i enjoyed that one...mine is:


roses are red
such as the color of my dick
after my mother sucks it
and rubs it with her tit

ive spent years wondering
about the dreams i have at night
ones where im gay
and fuck deaf and blind guys

and the world doesnt understand
why im so fucked up
its because i havent jacked off in years
a wad of cum will soon erupt

so maybe roses arent red
its just all in our mind
this i have figured...
sitting naked eating pork rines.

That's quality...almost better than mine!

movielife24
02/14/05, 07:09 PM
Roses are red
My heart is too
On this V-day I bled for you
From Trust Kill to Bleeding Through
I would like to say thank-you
Every lyric and song
With you boys I could never go wrong
Sometimes I’d change your lyrics to my name
But is it hard for you to blame
When I think about Roses are Red my heart skips a beat
I have “Conversations” on repeat
Mike, Brian, Matt, Vinny, and Kevin
You boy are truly my heaven
You’re the ones I miss
All our show memories together I reminisce
So happy Valentines Day
You boys reading my poem, is better than getting any bouquet

LPMagic
02/14/05, 07:14 PM
Roses are red,
Fuck Valentine's Day.

- Jeff

PomonaForEmpusa
02/14/05, 07:23 PM
roses are red
but then again, what isn't?
it seems these days, everything has been taking that shade
everything but you
keep hiding the colors but you'll never admit it
that rose i gave you was already broken

so typical
02/14/05, 07:33 PM
roses are red
scorn of the dead
you can suck me off if you start at the head


happy effen valentines!

supadupa003
02/14/05, 07:34 PM
Roses are red-
They drown in the sunlight
The way you gasped for air with me
Time follows each petal
as it falls to the ground,
the way you followed my heart
without making a sound.
The months go by;
Each petal has withered.
You’ve left yourself out to dry
for the winter is coming
and so is the wind.
It takes you to a better place:
Where the whispers can be heard for miles,
Where the cold will never kill the red roses,
Where the flowers can grow again.

xcorruptpunkx
02/14/05, 07:38 PM
Roses are red,
Fuck Valentine's Day.

- Jeff
yaaay

siren siren
02/14/05, 07:50 PM
roses are red...
and this heart turned from hue...
to worst than a forest.
i burn like trees..in the process of falling.
down...to the dust!!!
FUCK FUCK here comes violet...
late, as usual...she never had any luck.
only her long hair to hide those cheeks that she scratched...
during the rough.


ps. he made me do it <3

so typical
02/14/05, 07:52 PM
roses are red...
and this heart turned from hue...
to worst than a forest.
i burn like trees..in the process of falling.
down...to the dust!!!
FUCK FUCK here comes violet...
late, as usual...she never had any luck.
only her long hair to hide those cheeks that she scratched...
during the rough.


ps. he made me do it <3

i thought the price was fair.

punkassportz88
02/14/05, 07:52 PM
man there have been some REALLY funny poems...either the soviet russia or the head one get my vote

Trevor Sostarich
02/14/05, 07:55 PM
Roses are red
and right now so are you
I’d take my hands away from your throat
but I’d rather wait until you turn blue

I’d wait until you scream my name through the gasp of breath
And erase every memory starting with the one where we met
I’d wait patiently until I see your eyes drown in a thousand tears
and laugh in your face for all of these years

Roses like blood are red and meant to stain
Just like our love it’s a never ending game

Roses are read
and right now so are you
I’d take my hands away from your throat
but the truth is I love you…

forever_used
02/14/05, 08:08 PM
Roses are red
these nights are blue
im here all alone
just like all you

kallok
02/14/05, 08:23 PM
ok I put some effort into mine....

Although you said what you wanted to
There was no need to make a sound
Your expression, worth a thousand words
"I love you"'s turned to "I hate you"'s
Somehow knew this would happen
the roses are red but our love is blue
freezing to death in what once was love
A tragic ending to this love story

Pat Marquez
02/14/05, 08:33 PM
Roses are red and
Violets are blue
Honey is sweet, but not as sweet as you
Roses are red and
Violets are blue.

ad id aid id mud
ad id aid id mud

Dum di dia di da
(repeat 5 times)

Come pick my Roses!

Sweet from the flowers
honey from the bees
I´ve got a feeling, I´m ready to release
Roses are red and
Violets are blue
Honey is sweet,
but not as sweet as you.

It´s invisible but, so touchable
And I can feel it on my body,
so emotional.
I´m on a ride, on a ride
I´m a passenger.
I´m a victim of a heart love messenger.

Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
The only thing you said was
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
And roses are red.

Come with me baby,
Please fulfil my wish
Show it to me truly,
Show me with a kiss.
Roses are red and
Violets are blue
Honey is sweet,
but not as sweet as you.
It´s invisible but, so touchable
And I can feel it on my body,
so emotional.
I´m on a ride, on a ride
I´m a passenger.
I´m a victim of a heart love messenger.

Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
The only thing you said was
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
And roses are red.

Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
The only thing you said was
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
ad id aid id mud
ad id aid id mud
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Don´t take my roses awaaaay!

Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
The only thing you said was
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
And roses are red.

Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
The only thing you said was
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
Dum di dia di da
My roses are red.
oooh oooh oooh, yeah!

ad id aid id mud
ad id aid id mud


...and I win.

XxXimawesome666
02/14/05, 08:34 PM
the simpsons is underground?

no, but a lot of people probably dont remember the family guy episode with big fat lou.

thescoremag
02/14/05, 08:35 PM
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Roses are red,
and asses do stink.
I think I will stay away,
and stick it in the pink.

Signals Corrupted
02/14/05, 08:38 PM
[FONT=Arial][SIZE=7][COLOR=Black]

Roses are red,
and asses do stink.
I think I will stay away,
and stick it in the pink.


roses are red
violets are blue
that last post was lame..
it sucked.

XxXimawesome666
02/14/05, 08:42 PM
ROSES ARE RED
MY FACE IS BLUE
PLEASE TAKE THE GUN FROM MY MOUTH
OR PULL THE TRIGGER AND ILL BLEED ON YOU
...and with my one last gasping breath id apologize for bleeding on your shirt...

yah i wrote all of that. even the 5the line.

bitch.

SummerPerfuma
02/14/05, 08:50 PM
ROSES ARE RED
MY FACE IS BLUE
PLEASE TAKE THE GUN FROM MY MOUTH
OR PULL THE TRIGGER AND ILL BLEED ON YOU
...and with my one last gasping breath id apologize for bleeding on your shirt...

yah i wrote all of that. even the 5the line.

bitch.
i hope you're not serious about writing the 5th line..hah.

XxXimawesome666
02/14/05, 08:53 PM
i hope you're not serious about writing the 5th line..hah.

catch this.

what is it?

sarcasm.

happy V.D. EVERYONE!

(look another joke...get it? VD venereal disease!!) :love: :love: :love: :love: :love:

MATT2KOOL
02/14/05, 08:53 PM
roses are red
im really high
one more hit
and ill touch the sky

so typical
02/14/05, 08:54 PM
i hope you're not serious about writing the 5th line..hah.

you're so gullible

311evan311
02/14/05, 08:56 PM
roses are red
but im black and blue
beecause your mother is rough in the sack..

SummerPerfuma
02/14/05, 08:57 PM
you're so gullible
darn, you didnt see the..hah..
sucks for you

so typical
02/14/05, 09:03 PM
darn, you didnt see the..hah..
sucks for you

must have been a last minute thing

livethesounds
02/14/05, 09:05 PM
i was told the guys from rar were actually gonna go through these and pick the winner, its gonna be hard with about 90 b.s. entries, although alot of them are pretty funny. i wrote a pretty long poem, and so did a few other people, ive got some competiton i just hope whoever plagerized dosent win. ROSES ARE RED KICKS ASS!!!!!!!! EVERYBODY GO TO THEIR SHOWS!!!

thecatisblack22
02/14/05, 09:06 PM
Roses are red,
invisible thorns pierced her side,
the things that he said,
still fresh in her mind

"You and i, we won't work out"
he said with a sigh,"
while she lost her power,
and simply asked why

She sank in her mind,
immediately to suicide,
the life she might leave behind,
but the pain would subside

A blank stare in the mirror,
her face grew paler,
the blood dripped to her horror,
forcing the puddle larger and larger

the memories faded slowly,
once more she said his name,
darkness consumed her,
she would never feel this way again.

Fury15
02/14/05, 09:20 PM
why do i not get the soviet russia heart break you poem???

Caleb Cattivera
02/14/05, 09:21 PM
roses are red
im really high
one more hit
and ill touch the sky

roses are red
violets are blue
i wish i was high
too

blizzardb
02/14/05, 09:26 PM
Roses Are Red
But look at what i have bled
a page with blood and tears
for the love and pain through each of the years

A beacon of hope
in an ocean of struggle
and already in your rope
i have tied a noose

but you took my hand
and led me through the dark
you believed we were planned
but i needed to see the light

I've never known a woman so strong
You removed all of my doubts
I see you perfectly now
and ill remember your strength in all of our bouts

in the ocean, i dream of you every night
we sail to an island
our own private island
i swear to forever hold you tight

All i need is a world with only you
you've become my compass through life
and because of your strength
i swear to be forever true

apoemtothedead
02/14/05, 09:32 PM
the simpsons is underground?

It's Yakov Smirnoff, you dumbfuck.

apoemtothedead
02/14/05, 09:33 PM
why do i not get the soviet russia heart break you poem???

Because you have horrible taste in "foreign" comedians.

PunkRocks
02/14/05, 09:55 PM
Roses are Red,
And still grown in the US,
McCarthy missed this one,
In his kick-fest.

lovenotwar_rx
02/14/05, 10:11 PM
Roses are Red
Violets aren't really Blue
It's Valentine's Day
Boo Hoo Hoo

You've been thru heartache but who hasn't?
Any more emo poems and I've had it,
I'm not bashing on others
Because I'm no better than you,
But how many times can you whine to make us feel sorry for you?
This was a really good idea
Because some people are trully talented
Emo is emo, but you don't need to broadcast it.
You don't need to reminisce on this day
Because it's like any other.
Just makes you horny and ache for a lover.

Roses are Red
Violet's aren't really Blue,
It's Valentine's Day
Boo Hoo Hoo

Thought I'd give it a shot! :lol2: Feel free to laugh. I am!

ahnmin
02/14/05, 10:21 PM
Rarely do adolescents know love; with
open abandon, they
surrender to
every infinitesimal emotion, making
superfluous references to viscera. In

Actuality, it cajoles the most
ready of hearts to
eagerly accept this

Rendezvous of
existensial beauty and wonder soaked in its
desultoriness.

almosthorrific
02/14/05, 11:19 PM
Roses are red
And cliches stole her heart.
So she's letting him fumble
with buttons and zippers
so that he can tear her apart.

"do you love me? do you?
do you swear to fucking god that you love me?"

love is a letter straight from the heart
sealed with the kiss of syphilis

"i do. i do.
i swear to fucking god that i do!"

so open your legs
and shut your mouth
because that's the only time
you'll ever be beautiful.

QTheDangerMusic
02/14/05, 11:45 PM
Roses Are Red, she said with a frown,
As I watched the blood drip from her hands to the ground.
Gripping the stem as hard as she can,
the sharp thorns peircing the palm of her hand.

Roses Are Red, she said once again,
paying no attention to the pain she is in.
Walking down the sidewalk leaving a trail,
the bright crimson color of a love turned frail.

Roses Are Red and and so are her shoes,
as she wanders this world not knowing what to do.
Missing a smile, a kiss or a word.
"I love you" as sweet as a song from a bird.

Roses Are Red is a song that she sings,
as she ponders this life and the tears that it brings.
Lovers on the street remind her of you.
Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue.

Jake Garcia - 2/14/05

i like this alot...GODDAMN this is real good. if this doesnt win ill be so pissed. this really struck a chord with me...others were hilarious, but man...and i dont consider myself moved by sappy stuff so maybe this isnt sappy...or is it?

ah fuck it, SHOW ME YO' BOOTYHOLE!!! :shakin:

wuhr
02/15/05, 12:21 AM
roses are red
and your / V \ is so pink
i'll stick in my head
but not if you stink

roses are red
no money to send you to a spa
but get on the bed
and i'll stil give you a facial

roses are red
and after an early menstrual cycle so was my fist
there are a lot of emo kids dead
b/c they're slitting their wrists

:ugly_tock

SumRndmGrl
02/15/05, 02:19 AM
Only One
I want that one person that
I can curl up to and fall
Realizes silence is the greeatest indicative verb
Is willing to smother me in a rain cloud when I'm devestated
Will gossip if I'm happy
Will never not rub my back when life rubs me the right way
Drives the fastest to teh candy store if I'm feeling corporate
Understands the emotion at the first bar
Appreciates that space between my strokes
Doesn't confuse crazy with creative and spells both with a "k"
Knows my highs can be pretty low
Contradicts me by lying and telling me the truth
Accepts being my bad star and burning
Infects my thoughts with their consciousness
Can't yell when the problem is already screaming
Strikes a compromise in our assimilation
Tells illness to take two victims and not play favortism
I want that one person that
Recognizes they are only one person

--By Laneen W

LTJforprez
02/15/05, 02:28 AM
roses are red
violets are bluish
if it wasn't for jesus
we'd all be jewish


roses are red
your necks are too
fuck you intolerant bitches
jesus was a jew

pikenz
02/15/05, 03:42 AM
Roses are red.
violets are blue.
It feels good
when i violate myself with a shoe.

Fuck Buffalo.

-Dan Pickens

Snake
02/15/05, 03:48 AM
Roses are red.
With every stem we held,
My hands bled a river of my love, to feed us.
While your precious eyes beamed the light,
Allowing us to grow.

But as you turned your head away,
Roses dulled to brown.
And as you held your eyes lids tight,
Our once crimson love fatally became black.

From the cold breathe coming off your tongue,
Each part of us blew away,
Slowly falling onto the earth from which they came.
“She loves me, she loves me not”
The whisper that left my lips,
As I watched us fall apart.

Standing in a pool of my love,
My cuts for you will never close.
But yet you kept your eye lids shut,
As you placed a crown of thorns upon my head.
Taking all of what is left of us,
I die for your sins.
So bury me were we once grew.

But now as your eyes slowly open,
You stand there over me.
Staring at our withered peddles, blow across this barren land.
You sing to me,
How my smell is the only thing that ever puts a smile on your face.
As you stand slowly dying on this earth.

So ask yourself this.
Why it is you do insist, on letting our garden sit so baron and so cold,
If you plan on keeping me so close?
Was our love planted on ground still frozen stiff?
Is it not yet the right season for us to exist?

The thoughts that turn inside my head
As I smile back at you from underneath this wall of dirt.
You’re gentle voice is the only thing that keeps me warm.
As I slowly die below this earth.

Fighting to accept just what it is we truly are.
Can’t you see we’re too beautiful together too live our lives as weeds.
So much in us that wants too bloom,
To live our lives as seeds.

Bury yourself next to me.
Take a bucket of my blood.
Fix your eyes on me.
Tell me everything.
I swear I’ll rise for you again.
Bury yourself next to me.
Cover yourself in my love.
Take your eyes,
And shine your soul on me.

Let’s rise again.
Roses are red.


T. Monteiro

herlovelysmile
02/15/05, 09:00 AM
Roses Are Red
Insides are crimson
you murdered his soul
i hope you will miss him.

BlueSkiesDiner
02/15/05, 10:32 AM
Roses are red
Don't tell me lies
Or I'll cut my wrists
And then black my eyes.

BlueSkiesDiner
02/15/05, 10:34 AM
Roses are red
You fucking whore
This entire contest
Is majorly XtateXcoreX.

FrustrateMyFoes
02/15/05, 10:52 AM
i like this alot...GODDAMN this is real good. if this doesnt win ill be so pissed. this really struck a chord with me...others were hilarious, but man...and i dont consider myself moved by sappy stuff so maybe this isnt sappy...or is it?

ah fuck it, SHOW ME YO' BOOTYHOLE!!! :shakin:


Thanks.

actionandaction
02/15/05, 11:42 AM
Roses are red
Don't tell me lies
Or I'll cut my wrists
And then black my eyes.

haha both your entries made me laugh out loud. scene points for you.

cheeruptheEmo
02/15/05, 12:02 PM
Roses are red
Don't tell me lies
Or I'll cut my wrists
And then black my eyes.

hawthorne heights...

apex
02/15/05, 12:16 PM
It's Yakov Smirnoff, you dumbfuck.

simpsons?

onemorechance
02/15/05, 12:48 PM
roses are red
as i lay in bed
drowning in tears
all because of you

roses are red
the sky hasnt been blue
and if only you knew
how much i miss you

roses are red
im writing to you
i wanted you to know
that i still love you

thats the first poem ive ever written...i thought id give it a try tho:redface:

mybreakingpoint
02/15/05, 01:03 PM
Roses Are Red
Like the stamp on the letter
The one thing to tell you
If things will get better

Paper Is White
Like the palm of your hand
Where he used to write things
You now don't understand

Teardrops Are Black
As they roll to the floor
Reminders of things
You don't have anymore

Ceiling Is Blue
Like the pavement at dawn
You don't know what you had
'Til it's finally gone

Roses Are Red
But so is your heart
Now it's time to forget
And it's time to restart

alltimelow00
02/15/05, 02:33 PM
Hey whats up guys. This is Josh from California doubt you guys remember me. Vinny and I totally had a bro down sesh in Bakersfield. Yo check my poem out its in The poem section.

alltimelow00
02/15/05, 02:39 PM
Valentine's day Massacre
Roses Are Red....
These Violets were once blue
Until This curse of mine..oh how i hate St.Valentine.
The news was given with a smile and a laugh...
I was caught in her sick twisted trap
I'm stuck here this pain twists and twists
I still insist on hearing what consists of lies and betrayal
And a whore i once knew...These Roses Are Red
Violets turn black...As I hit my own eyes to not see this gap
That Sits in my heart and tears me apart. Please somebody help me
On this day of St.Valentine...

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apoemtothedead
02/15/05, 07:50 PM
simpsons?

No, Yakov Smirnoff.

www.yakov.com

Signals Corrupted
02/16/05, 05:16 AM
roses are red
are a terrible band
if they were sex
i'd stick with my hand

cheeruptheEmo
02/17/05, 03:23 PM
Roses Are Red
Like the stamp on the letter
The one thing to tell you
If things will get better

Paper Is White
Like the palm of your hand
Where he used to write things
You now don't understand

Teardrops Are Black
As they roll to the floor
Reminders of things
You don't have anymore

Ceiling Is Blue
Like the pavement at dawn
You don't know what you had
'Til it's finally gone

Roses Are Red
But so is your heart
Now it's time to forget
And it's time to restart

i like this one