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Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/06/14, 05:40 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 351
Posted By BreatheRight
Undo

I don't know about anyone else but I really don't like reading other peoples drawn out lyrics that seem to be lacking in substance and creativity... seriously alot of cliche shit i've seen on this...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/02/14, 06:42 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 268
Posted By BreatheRight
Much thanks.

Much thanks.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/28/14, 02:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 268
Posted By BreatheRight
Paving The Path

Have you ever lost the feeling to feel?
Like emotions were just created for someone to steal.

An intrinsic being,
I've depleted my feelings,
Like how a piece of gum loses it's taste.

It's a lonely...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/28/14, 01:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 593
Posted By BreatheRight
The message is pretty vague, I would try to be...

The message is pretty vague, I would try to be more specific with your words. (E.G. you said you'll show her hope..( amongst many other things) but don't say how you're gonna do that.) Some cliche...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/27/14, 08:05 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 215
Posted By BreatheRight
thank yas

thank yas
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/22/14, 07:01 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 559
Posted By BreatheRight
its not bad, pretty redundant though.

its not bad, pretty redundant though.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/22/14, 06:45 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 215
Posted By BreatheRight
A short one

Just jotted down a quick few words that fitted the mood. Feedback appreciated.


I'm not a bad person,
I just lived in a bad place

So when my face seems laced with hate,
It's because I was in a...
Forum: Personal Life 09/03/11, 09:42 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 6,316
Posted By BreatheRight
lol i'm glad your not a psychologist, negative...

lol i'm glad your not a psychologist, negative nancy keep livin ur life on this website with ur 6,000+ posts rofl, no wonder u so angry about this thread.. just an excuse for your to take a chance to...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 09/03/11, 01:32 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 783
Posted By BreatheRight
this shit sucks, bad spelling and doesn't even...

this shit sucks, bad spelling and doesn't even make sense
Forum: Personal Life 09/03/11, 01:13 AM
Replies: 64
Views: 6,316
Posted By BreatheRight
My dads a prick

So i tend to drink quite often... But i'm leaving for the service soon so I figure i might as well... But tonight i really feel down in the dumps.. My dad says.. " SO i have a drunk for a son" ...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 09/02/11, 09:36 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 386
Posted By BreatheRight
Thanks

Thanks
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 09/02/11, 12:35 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 386
Posted By BreatheRight
Time

Time flys when youíve got nothing to do
The sun lit sky turns black from blue

Its hard to tell if yesterday was last week or not
Itís hard to tell if this alcohol is my friend or gut rot

Ohí my...
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/13/11, 08:40 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,360
Posted By BreatheRight
yea, i know i'm right, but why you so bad tho?

yea, i know i'm right, but why you so bad tho?
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/11/11, 01:58 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,037
Posted By BreatheRight
I never said I thought this was a poem, you...

I never said I thought this was a poem, you cynical POS.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/07/11, 11:44 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,360
Posted By BreatheRight
you're a fucking loser that is most likely fat...

you're a fucking loser that is most likely fat and a virgin. real talk, sorry. it's reality-check season.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 07/07/11, 11:35 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,037
Posted By BreatheRight
You're a fucking garbage poet, this is my proof. ...

You're a fucking garbage poet, this is my proof. Quit wasting your and everyones time and find a real hobby you POS.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 04/14/11, 01:31 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 978
Posted By BreatheRight
this is almost as bad as your wild things tattoo...

this is almost as bad as your wild things tattoo fat slob
Forum: Personal Life 02/22/11, 03:15 PM
Replies: 150
Views: 4,957
Posted By BreatheRight
I got my wisdom teeth taken out without being...

I got my wisdom teeth taken out without being uncoscious and I felt just about everything that happend, including the hammer they used to break my teeth.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/12/11, 03:04 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 541
Posted By BreatheRight
Top 8

Who are the top 6 most talented poet/lyricists of the past 4 months on this forum.

Kus all i'm seein is a bunch of generic shiz nit.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 02/07/11, 02:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 917
Posted By BreatheRight
fail

fail
Forum: Politics 01/21/11, 10:16 AM
Replies: 278
Views: 23,712
Posted By BreatheRight
High school is the foundation for your placement...

High school is the foundation for your placement in college, wrong, not a joke.
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/14/11, 09:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 315
Posted By BreatheRight
if you say so

if you say so
Forum: Share Your Lyrics and Poetry 01/13/11, 09:54 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 315
Posted By BreatheRight
Without much

It's time to convene
Something along the lines of a get rich or die tryin scheme.
Kus this work thing, just ain't workin for me.
I can't even afford paper from a tree,
Infact this was written on a...
Forum: Personal Life 01/11/11, 08:23 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,588
Posted By BreatheRight
Well, I talked to someone on the phone about it...

Well, I talked to someone on the phone about it and the dude answered just about every question I had except for the record part.

I got a minor consumption when i was 16 and now im 20 and it's still...
Forum: Personal Life 01/06/11, 11:13 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 1,588
Posted By BreatheRight
Well my GPA isn't close to a 3.7, but I thought...

Well my GPA isn't close to a 3.7, but I thought it is about the asvab they care about, not gpa/act.. As far as the mile run, not really worried about that part.


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